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Dec. 1, 2022

please review my writing.

What responsibilities do you have at work?
As an online salesperson, I’m in charge of sending promotional emails or messages to prospective customers, answering their questions about our products, and filling out their invoices, which I then send to one of the export document staff.

What is your typical day like at work?
Well, my work day starts at 9 in the morning, and the first thing I do is turn on my computer and open Facebook, Google Mail, and Microsoft Word. I spend most of the time writing promotional letters for our newest products. I also reply to my customers’ questions if there are any. If a customer makes an order, I will fill in the invoice for them and send it to one of the export document staff. I get off work at 5 pm, but I am still on call around the clock since my customers can contact me at any time.
9. What was your first day at work like?
Well, even though I have been working there for about four years, the memory of my first day is still crystal clear in my mind as it was such an out-of-the-ordinary experience. I have the luxury of working at home for a company that is owned by one of my family members, my uncle. So on the first day of work, my uncle held my hand through the whole process of getting used to my tasks, in the comfort of my home. I was not anxious or nervous at all, so I was able to get hold of my duties easily.

11. What kinds of jobs are popular in Vietnam?
As I see, jobs in the technology sector are in the most in-demand right now. It is undoubted that our world has entered the digital age, or what some call the social media revolution, where almost every aspect of life is now happening on the Internet, whether it is business, education, or entertainment. In my country, most traditional firms are going through digital transformation to increase competitiveness against new ones, who have integrated technology into their core when they started. That leads to an ever-increasing demand for IT staff. And I read in some newspapers that the number of IT jobs in Vietnam has increased sixfold over the last five years. So you can see how popular these types of jobs are in my country.

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What responsibilities do you have at work?

As an online salesperson, I’m in charge of sending promotional emails or messages to prospective customers, answering their questions about our products, and filling out their invoices, which I then send to one of the export document staff.

What is your typical day like at work?

Well, my work day starts at 9 in the morning, and the first thing I do is turn on my computer and open Facebook, Google Mail, and Microsoft Word.

I spend most of the time writing promotional letters for our newest products.

I also reply to my customers’ questions if there are any.

If a customer makes an order, I will fill in the invoice for them and send it to one of the export document staff.

I get off work at 5 pm, but I am still on call around the clock since my customers can contact me at any time.

9. What was your first day at work like?

Well, even though I have been working there for about four years, the memory of my first day is still crystal clear in my mind as it was such an out-of-the-ordinary experience.

I have the luxury of working at home for a company that is owned by one of my family members, my uncle.

So on the first day of work, my uncle held my hand through the whole process of getting used to my tasks, in the comfort of my home.

I was not anxious or nervous at all, so I was able to get hold of my duties easily.

What kinds of jobs are popular in Vietnam?

As I see it, jobs in the technology sector are in the most in- demand right now.

~~It is u~~Undoubted ~~that~~ly, our world has entered the digital age, or what some call the social media revolution, where almost every aspect of life is now happening on the Internet, whether it is business, education, or entertainment.

In my country, most traditional firms are going through digital transformation to increase competitiveness against new ones, who have integrated technology into their core when they started.

And I read in some newspapers that the number of IT jobs in Vietnam has increased sixfold over the last five years.

So you can see how popular these types of jobs are in my country.

Feedback

You write really well, and you even seem to have a grasp on idioms like "crystal clear". To be honest I'm not sure I can provide much feedback -- there aren't many mistakes to correct! Nice work.

please review my writing.

What responsibilities do you have at work?