Please Review My Essay

Topic: gGlobal warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.

In today’s modern era, more and more serious that every also concerned.

I'm not sure what you want to say. You do not have a main clause, a subject and verb. Perhaps you want to say, "In today's modern era the environmental issues are getting so serious that everyone should be concerned."

In this essay, iI will indicate the cause of global warming and give the measure tackle issue.....?

it is not clear what "give the measure tackle issue" means.

On the one hand, one of the predominant reasons for problems pertaining to climate is pollutionmajor causes of pollution is .......

There has been a substantial increase in the automobile industry,production of automobiles: everyone owns a car whichand this has resulted in inevitable air pollution, m. Moreover, according to the research by health officials, traffic congestion has increased multifolfexponentially in the past few years in metropolitant cities like name india.???

You can't separate two main clauses, S +V and S+V with a comma. This rule can be broken if the two clauses are very short. The name for this rule is a comma splice.

aAdditionally, another prominent factor is used plastic which takes centuries to recyclgive the measure tackle issue.

"recycle" isn't the right word.

Hence people throw it away it in wherever if they want.

people throw away plastic wherever they want.

On the other hand, there are innumerable measures that can be implemented to avoid chaos.

unlike there are "innumerable" measures. Maybe "concrete" or "specific"
instead of "chaos" "environmental disaster"

The first solution is the management of cars and encourage exertthe promotion of electronic vehicle.s.

the conjunction "and" has to unite like parts of speech: noun and noun, adj and adj, etc.

For example, tesla has been running their electronic cars throughout tTexas.

"running" is very vague.

Last but not least, the government bodiely, government organizations should introduce stringent laws to avoid theprohibit....... ( owning transportation is harmful environment and levy heavy penalties if found so, these measured should be accepted by all the concerninged citizens.)

the rest of the sentence is not grammatical and it is hard to understand. Do you mean" prohibit the ownership of private transportation"? The government should levy heavy penalties for violations.??

Howe ver, the government should come up with and introduce adamant rules and instead of electronic vehicle.

instead of ???

In today’s modern era, more and more serious that every also concerned.

There has been a substantial increae in the automobile industry, everyone owns a car which has resulted in inevitable air pollution, moreover, according to the research by health officials, traffic congestion has increased multifolf in the past few years in metropolitant cities like name india.

In today’s modern era, more and moreglobal warming is becoming so serious that every alsoone is becoming concerned.

In this essay, iI will indicate the cause of global warming and give the measure tackle issue.

There has been a substantial increase in the automobile industry, everyone owns a car which has resulted in inevitable air pollution, moreover, according to the research by health officials, traffic congestion has increased multifolf in the past few years in metropolitant cities like name iIndia.

I don't know what "multifolf" is so I'm not sure how to correct it. :)

aAdditionally, another prominent factor is used plastic which take centuries to recycle.

Hence people throw it away it in wherever if they want.

The first solution is the management of cars and encourage exerting the use of electronic vehicles.

Last but not least, the government bodies should introduce stringent laws to avoid thdiscourage owning transportation that is harmful to the environment and levy heavy penalties if found so, these measureds should be accepted by all the concerning citizensitizens concerned.

Howe ver, the government should come up with and introduce adamant rules and insteadencourage the use of electronic vehicles.