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Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you a agree or disagree with this opinion?

A number of people think that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. I do not completely agree with this opinion

The government should support spending on school facilities. The government helps 50% school fees for families have a disadvantaged. Education is very important there are other sectors that the government also needs to pay attention to. The government should support spending on school f facilities. A typical example is medical universities students have always earn expensive school fees than students the other universities. Because the facility, the machine, the equipment is very high, when the government can do this, may be help a part for students and their families. The government should support 50% school fees for families have a disadvantaged, by reason of schooling is the most important tool in unemployment, there are people who are truly talented but just because of tuition money, they cannot go to college. The government can know that by creating a survey to help. Education is very important but there are still other sectors that the government must pay attention to, the tourism industry in Vietnam this year contributed 13,9% GDP to Vietnam GDP, brining great income to Vietnam. The import-export industry rank second in Asia. We can see that these two industries alone can bring abundant economic resources to the country, and that is why the government must pay attention to their development.

In short, the government should support facilities and those who want to go to should but have difficult circumstances,

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Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it.

To what extent do you a agree or disagree with this opinion?

A number of people think that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it.

repeat of previous sentence?

I do not completely agree with this opinion


The government should support
spefunding onfor school facilities.

This sounds better.

The government helps 50%should help with 50% of the school fees for families havewho are at a disadvantaged.

or: for families that are disadvantaged.
Either way is fine.

Education is very important t. There are other sectors that the government also needs to pay attention to.

The government should support spending on school f facilities.

Repeat again?

A typical example is when medical universities y students have always earnhave more expensive school fees than students athe other universities.

Because the facility, the machines, theand equipment isare very high, when the government can do this, may be help a partpartially help for students and their families.

is is for one thing. are is for multiple.

The government should support 50% of school fees for families have awho are disadvantaged, by reason ofecause schooling is the most important tool in unemployment, t. There are people who are truly talented but just because of lack of tuition money, they cannot go to college.

The government can knowbetter understand that by creating a survey to help.

Your sentence was OK, but this sounds better.

Education is very important but there are still other sectors that the government must pay attention to. For example, the tourism industry in Vietnam this year contributed 13,9% GDP to Vietnam GDP, bringing great income to Vietnam.

Their import-export industry ranked second in Asia.

We can see that these two industries alone can bring abundant economic resources to the country, and that is why the government must pay attention to their development.

In short, the government should support facilities and those who want to go to should but have difficult circumstances,.

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lethanhhang

Oct. 26, 2023

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Thank you s so much.

please review my essay


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To what extent do you a agree or disagree with this opinion?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A number of people think that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it.


A number of people think that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it.

repeat of previous sentence?

I do not completely agree with this opinion The government should support spending on school facilities.


I do not completely agree with this opinion


The government should support
spefunding onfor school facilities.

This sounds better.

The government helps 50% school fees for families have a disadvantaged.


The government helps 50%should help with 50% of the school fees for families havewho are at a disadvantaged.

or: for families that are disadvantaged. Either way is fine.

Education is very important there are other sectors that the government also needs to pay attention to.


Education is very important t. There are other sectors that the government also needs to pay attention to.

The government should support spending on school f facilities.


The government should support spending on school f facilities.

Repeat again?

A typical example is medical universities students have always earn expensive school fees than students the other universities.


A typical example is when medical universities y students have always earnhave more expensive school fees than students athe other universities.

Because the facility, the machine, the equipment is very high, when the government can do this, may be help a part for students and their families.


Because the facility, the machines, theand equipment isare very high, when the government can do this, may be help a partpartially help for students and their families.

is is for one thing. are is for multiple.

The government should support 50% school fees for families have a disadvantaged, by reason of schooling is the most important tool in unemployment, there are people who are truly talented but just because of tuition money, they cannot go to college.


The government should support 50% of school fees for families have awho are disadvantaged, by reason ofecause schooling is the most important tool in unemployment, t. There are people who are truly talented but just because of lack of tuition money, they cannot go to college.

The government can know that by creating a survey to help.


The government can knowbetter understand that by creating a survey to help.

Your sentence was OK, but this sounds better.

Education is very important but there are still other sectors that the government must pay attention to, the tourism industry in Vietnam this year contributed 13,9% GDP to Vietnam GDP, brining great income to Vietnam.


Education is very important but there are still other sectors that the government must pay attention to. For example, the tourism industry in Vietnam this year contributed 13,9% GDP to Vietnam GDP, bringing great income to Vietnam.

The import-export industry rank second in Asia.


Their import-export industry ranked second in Asia.

We can see that these two industries alone can bring abundant economic resources to the country, and that is why the government must pay attention to their development.


We can see that these two industries alone can bring abundant economic resources to the country, and that is why the government must pay attention to their development.

In short, the government should support facilities and those who want to go to should but have difficult circumstances,


In short, the government should support facilities and those who want to go to should but have difficult circumstances,.

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