AtIn the present age, global warming is a challenging issue worldwide.

This essay will discuss the causes behind this problem and statpropose several measures that can be taken by the government and individuals to tackle this issue.

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To begin with, the global warming can stem frombe caused by various causes.factors¶

Firstly, using too much fossil fuels such as oi,l and gas can release carbon dioxide and other harmful gases into the atmosphere.

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In cities, a large amount of gases comes from using these energy resources for transport, electricity and heating.

Hoever, trees and jungles have a important role in regulating the climate and promoting a good health envronment.

Thus, when the forest is being lost gradually, thisre will be fewer trees, this will lead to the increasing amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.

Firstly, they should encourage companies to change from using fossil fuels to renewable energy such as solar energy, wind energy and water energy.

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This can help reduce the greenhouse gas emissions and allow companies to sa ve money in athe long timerun.

As individuals, we can take part inparticipate in protecting the environnemental protection, use by using public transport instead of private catrs.

By taking these actionmesures, this problem would be properly tackled.

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What are the causes of global warming, and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?

At the present age, global warming is a challenging issue worldwide.

Or "Today / At the moment"

To begin with, the global warming can stem from various causes.

Firstly, using too muchany fossil fuels, such as oi,l and gas, can release carbon dioxide and other harmful gases into the atmosphere.

In cities, a large amount of (these / harmful) gases comes from using these energy resources for transport, electricity, and heating.

Deforestation is mainly caused forby agriculture and logging.

However, trees and jungles have an important role in regulating the climate and promoting a healthy environment.

Thus, when the forest is being lost gradually lost, this leads to thean increasing amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.

(First / Firstly), they should encourage companies to change from using fossil fuels to renewable energy, such as solar energy, wind energy, and water energhydroelectricity.

Water power is okay, but the official term is hydroelectricity / hydropower.

This can help to reduce the greenhouse gas emissions and allow companies to sa ve money in athe long timeerm.

(Secondly / Second), there should be heavy penalties for illegal forest exploitation to make sure that the forests are managed and protected.

As individuals, we can also take part in environmental protection, usehelping the environment, by using public transport instead of private catrs.

"Environmental protection" refers to what a government can do, not an individual.

By taking these actions, this problem wcould be properly tackled.

Could, not would. Would means it will be 100% fixed if we do only this. Could means it will have a good impact, but we might need to do more. For complex issues like the environment, no solution is 100% certain, so could.

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