Oct. 12, 2022
Please review my essay
IELTS Speaking question part 3:
Describe an interesting job you want to do in the future.
You should say:
What it is.
How you can get this job.
What kinds of work you would do for the job.
And explain why you want to have it.
I have always been good at English since I started learning it in middle school. As a result, I always want to work in a field that can make use of that. So, I have got a bachelor’s degree in international business and worked as an export-import coordinator. However, the stress from dealing with difficult customers made me quit after 2 years. Now, I would like to become an IELTS English teacher, and I am actually preparing to become one.
This is because there is an increasing demand for IELTS teachers in Vietnam as 12th graders who receive an IELTS score of 4 to 6.5 and above will be exempted from the English test of the national high school graduation exams and admitted to several top universities. Consequently, more and more IELTS private institutions have been built, and they only require their applicants for teacher positions to have an IELTS score of 7.5 and above.
I prepared for about 1 year before sitting the test. For that year, I have tried to write 2 essays for the writing part and answer 3 speaking questions each day, as well as listen to one listening test and write it down each week.
In my opinion, being an English teacher is not really psychologically demanding as most of the time they work with students, who tend to respect their teachers. In addition, private institutions typically provide their teachers with teaching materials such as plan books and textbooks, and they do not really need to prepare lesson plans. I have seen many of my friends enrolling in a course of these institutions and quitting right after 3 weeks. So, I think this job is a rather easy job with a decent wage. However, I plan to work for one institution for about 4 years and gradually gain a reputation and network. Then I would like to open a small one-teacher private institution myself in my own home. And one class would include more than 10 students. I think this would be a very lucrative and stable business.
I have always been good at English since I started learning it in middle school.
You may wish to use contractions when you speak: "I have always" -> "I've always"
As a result, I've always wanted to work in a field that canould make use of that.
I think "can" would probably be okay, too.
So, I have got a bachelor’s degree in international business and worked as an export-import coordinator.
This is because there is an increasing demand for IELTS teachers in Vietnam as 12th graders who receive an IELTS score of 4 to 6.5 and above will be exempted from the English test of the national high school graduation exams and admitted to several top universities.
Consequently, more and more IELTS private institutions have been built, and they only require their applicants for teacher positions to have an IELTS score of 7.5 and above.
I prepared for about 1 year before sitting the test.
I know IELTS is British, but in American English we would say "take" instead of "sit"
For that year, I have tried to write 2 essays for the writing part and answer 3 speaking questions each day, as well as listen to one listening test and write it down each week.
If the action is completely in the past, just use past tense. If you were still preparing for that test, you could write: "For this year, I've tried to write two essays..."
In my opinion, being an English teacher is not really psychologically demanding as most of the time they work with students, who tend to respect their teachers.
In addition, private institutions typically provide their teachers with teaching materials such as plan books and textbooks, and they do not really need to prepare lesson plans.
I have seen many of my friends enrolling in a course of these institutions and quitting right after 3 weeks.
Seen [NP] VERB is more common than VERB-ing. It's usually a safe bet to choose the first pattern. The -ing pattern is usually used for continuous actions, e.g. "they said they've seen people acting suspicious around the bank".
With "right after three weeks", it sounds like they waited specifically three weeks before quitting.
So, I think this job is a rather easy job with a decent wage.
However, I plan to work for one institution for about 4 years and gradually gain a reputation and network.
Then I would like to open a small one-teacher private institution myself in my own home.
And one class would include more than 10 students.
I think this would be a very lucrative and stable business.
Feedback
Your plan sounds great. I hope it goes well for you. If you want to sound more natural in speaking, you might consider using simpler conjunctions. Phrases like "consequently" and "in addition" are very formal, and so they are used less in speaking than in writing. I would choose "so" and "also", respectively, in your sentences above.
Oct. 12, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I really appreciate your kindness.
Please review my essay
IELTS Speaking question part 3:
Describe an interesting job you want to do in the future.
You should say:
What it is.
How you can get this job.
What kinds of work you would do for the job.
And explain why you want to have it.
I have always been good at English ever since I started learning it in middle school.
As a result, I have always wanted to work in a field that can make use of that.
So, I have got a bachelor’s degree in international business and worked as an export-import coordinator.
However, the stress from dealing with difficult customers made me quit after 2 years.
Now, I would like to become an IELTS English teacher, and I am actually preparing to become one.
This is because there is an increasing demand for IELTS teachers in Vietnam as 12th graders who receive an IELTS score of 4 to 6.5 and above will be exempted from the English test of the national high school graduation exams and admitted to several top universities.
Consequently, more and more IELTS private institutions have been built, and they only require their applicants for teacher positions to have an IELTS score of 7.5 and above.
I prepared for about 1 year before sitting the test.
For thatis year, I have tried to write 2 essays for the writing part and answer 3 speaking questions each day, as well as listen tdo one listening test and write it down each week.
I slightly corrected this sentence so as not to make the word "listen(ing)" redundant
In my opinion, being an English teacher is not really psychologically demanding as most of the time they work with students, who tend to respect their teachers.
In addition, private institutions typically provide their teachers with teaching materials such as plan books and textbooks, and they do not really need to prepare lesson plans.
I have seen many of my friends enrolling in a course of these institutions and quitting right after 3 weeks.
So, I think this job is a rather easy jobone with a decent wage.
Again, it's better to avoid repeating the same word in the same sentence :)
However, I plan to work for one institution for about 4 years and gradually gain a reputation and network.
Then I would like to open a small one-teacher private institution myself in my own home.
And one class would include more than 10 students.
I think this would be a very lucrative and stable business.
Feedback
I wish you the very best in your endeavours! :)
Oct. 12, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I really appreciate your kindness.
I wish you the best too.
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