Oct. 7, 2022
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Speaking IELTS
11. Is there another type of job you would like to do?
I would like to be an English teacher. And I'm actually preparing to become one at the moment. In my country, Vietnam, there is an increasing demand for English teacher, so it is quite easy to become one. As long as I have a 7 IELTS qualification, there are many institutions that I can choose to work for.
12. Would you recommend your current job to other people?
Yes, I would recommend it to university undergraduates or high schoolers. This is because serving drinks in a street juice shop is less stressful and physical demanding than other jobs that these young people can be recruited such as working as a cashier or restaurant servers. A street shop is quite small, so the cleaning part is rather easy. And the best thing, in my opinion, is that I can drink delicious fruit juice for free.
16. Where do you want to see yourself in 10 years?
In ten years, I would like to see myself being able to open a small class for IELTS learners in my own house, and I would be the only teacher there , so one class would have no more than 10 students.
17. Do you miss being a student?
I do miss the time of being a student as I had no worry about money back then, but the exhaustion and stress from learning math, physics and science make me really glad that I'm not a student any more.
In my country, Vietnam, there is an increasing demand for English teachers, so it is quite easy to become one.
As long as I have a 7 in IELTS qualification, there are many institutions that I can choose to work for.
This is because serving drinks in a street juice shop is less stressful and physically demanding than other jobs that these young people can be recruited for, such as working as a cashier or restaurant servers.
In ten years, I would like to see myself being able to open a small class for IELTS learners in my own house, and I would be the only teacher there , so one class would have no more than 10 students.
I do miss the time of being a student, as I had no worryies about money back then, but the exhaustion and stress from learning math, physics, and science make me really glad that I'm not a student any more.
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Oct. 9, 2022
I really appreciate your help.
In my country, Vietnam, there is an increasing demand for English teachers, so it is quite easy to become one.
As long as I have a 7 IELTS qualification, there are many institutions that I canould choose to work for.
could - because it's still a hypothetical in the future, not something that is currently 100% true for you
This is because serving drinks in a street juice shop is less stressful and physical demanding than other jobs that these young people can be recruited for, such as working as a cashier or restaurant servers.
In ten years, I would like to see myself being able to open a small class for IELTS learners in my own house, and I would be the only teacher there , so one class would have no more than 10 students.
You can say "I would like to" or "I see myself", but if you say "I would like to see myself..." it means you can't imagine yourself doing that thing in 10 years but you would like to be able to imagine yourself doing that thing in 10 years. We don't combine both phrases unless we want to use this extremely specific meaning.
I do miss the time of being a student as I had no worryies about money back then, but the exhaustion and stress from learning math, physics and science make me really glad that I'm not a student any more.
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Great job!
Oct. 9, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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Please review my essay |
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Speaking IELTS |
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11. |
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Is there another type of job you would like to do? |
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I would like to be an English teacher. |
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And I'm actually preparing to become one at the moment. |
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In my country, Vietnam, there is an increasing demand for English teacher, so it is quite easy to become one. In my country, Vietnam, there is an increasing demand for English teachers, so it is quite easy to become one. In my country, Vietnam, there is an increasing demand for English teachers, so it is quite easy to become one. |
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As long as I have a 7 IELTS qualification, there are many institutions that I can choose to work for. As long as I have a 7 IELTS qualification, there are many institutions that I c could - because it's still a hypothetical in the future, not something that is currently 100% true for you As long as I have a 7 in IELTS qualification, there are many institutions that I can choose to work for. |
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Would you recommend your current job to other people? |
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Yes, I would recommend it to university undergraduates or high schoolers. |
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This is because serving drinks in a street juice shop is less stressful and physical demanding than other jobs that these young people can be recruited such as working as a cashier or restaurant servers. This is because serving drinks in a street juice shop is less stressful and physical demanding than other jobs that these young people can be recruited for, such as working as a cashier or restaurant server This is because serving drinks in a street juice shop is less stressful and physically demanding than other jobs that these young people can be recruited for, such as working as a cashier or restaurant server |
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A street shop is quite small, so the cleaning part is rather easy. |
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And the best thing, in my opinion, is that I can drink delicious fruit juice for free. |
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Where do you want to see yourself in 10 years? |
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In ten years, I would like to see myself being able to open a small class for IELTS learners in my own house, and I would be the only teacher there , so one class would have no more than 10 students. In ten years, I You can say "I would like to" or "I see myself", but if you say "I would like to see myself..." it means you can't imagine yourself doing that thing in 10 years but you would like to be able to imagine yourself doing that thing in 10 years. We don't combine both phrases unless we want to use this extremely specific meaning. In ten years, I would like to see myself being able to open a small class for IELTS learners in my own house, and I would be the only teacher there |
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Do you miss being a student? |
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I do miss the time of being a student as I had no worry about money back then, but the exhaustion and stress from learning math, physics and science make me really glad that I'm not a student any more. I do miss I do miss the time of being a student, as I had no worr |
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