Dec. 1, 2022
please review my essay.
6. Which matters to you more, the job itself or the people you work with?
The job itself matters to me more because while I can just ignore the people I work with, I cannot ignore my duties. If my colleagues are arrogant or have a bad temper, I will just need to avoid having a conversation with them, or if they are negligence and make my work more difficult or heavier, I will just tell them that I will report this to the manager and they had better stop neglecting their duties. But if my job is boring, mundane, unrewarding, or unsatisfying in whatever aspects, there is nothing I can do about that, can’t I?
7. Have you ever changed your work before?
No, I haven’t. I have been working for my company ever since I graduated from university. But when I was still studying, I worked part-time and hopped jobs rather frequently. This is because I could only find a labor job during that time, but my standard of fitness was low so I couldn’t keep up with one job for a long time and had to take a break and then found another job when I felt better.
8. Do you think you will change your job in the future?
Actually, I am preparing to become an English teacher at the moment. I have already informed my uncle that I cannot work for him anymore and that he should find a replacement before the end of this year.
Do you get on well with your co-workers?
Well, I guess the answer is yes if you consider having no dispute or conflict as getting on well. I work at home for a small company that has less than ten employees, and I only need to contact two of them for work. There is no interaction between the three of us except for work-related purposes, and our duties hardly affect each other, which means if one of us performs badly at work, the others’ workloads or salaries will be unaffected. So there is nothing for us to argue about. Sometimes I really feel like I was working with robots, not human beings.
please review my essay.
6. Which matters to you more, the job itself or the people you work with?
The job itself matters to me more because while I can just ignore the people I work with, I cannot ignore my duties.
If my colleagues are arrogant or have a bad temper, I will just need to avoid having a conversations with them, or. Likewise if they are negligencet and make my work more difficult or heavier, I will just tell, I will inform them that I will report thiseir behaviour to thea manager and they had better stopstop them from neglecting their duties.
ButHowever if my job is boring, mundane, unrewarding, or unsatisfying in whatever aspects,unfortunately there is nothing I can do about that, can’t I?.
Try to keep to three words with listing things with a comma.
"Can't I?" seems very casual / rude , especially in a work context.
7. Have you ever changed your work before?
No, I haven’ not.
Try to not use contractions, as it is casual.
I have been working for my company ever since I graduated from university.
But whenWhile I was still studying, I worked part-time and hoppchanged jobs rather frequently.
Try not to start a sentence with "But",
This is because I could only find a laborious job during that time, but my standard ofmy fitness was low so I couldn’t keep up with one job for atoo long time and. So I had to take a break and then foufind another job when I felt better.
8. Do you think you will change your job in the future?
ActuallyYes, I am preparing to become an English teacher at the moment.
If this is for a written essay please try to stick to standard written English not spoken English.
I have already informed my uncle that I cannot work for him anymore and that he should find a replacement before the end of this year.
Do you get on well with your co-workers?
WellYes, I guess the answer is yes if you consideret on with my co-workers as we havinge no disputes or conflict as getting on wells.
Same as above, your writing is very causal like you are talking to a friend.
I work at home for a small company that has less than ten employees, and I only need to contact two of them for work.
There is no interaction between the three of us except for work-related purposes, and our duties hardly affect each other, w. Which means if one of us performs badly at work, the others’ workloads or salaries of the other two will be unaffected.
SoTherefore there is nothing for us to argue about.
'Therefore' is more formal than 'so'.
Sometimes I really feel like I was working with robots, not human beings.N/A
I would remove this line as it could be taken as rude, as if you are insulting your co-workers.
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I think your writing is very natural but since this writing is about work you should try to be more formal in your word choices.
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No, I haven’t. No, I have Try to not use contractions, as it is casual. |
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please review my essay. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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6. Which matters to you more, the job itself or the people you work with? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The job itself matters to me more because while I can just ignore the people I work with, I cannot ignore my duties. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If my colleagues are arrogant or have a bad temper, I will just need to avoid having a conversation with them, or if they are negligence and make my work more difficult or heavier, I will just tell them that I will report this to the manager and they had better stop neglecting their duties. If my colleagues are arrogant or have a bad temper, I will just need to avoid having |
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But if my job is boring, mundane, unrewarding, or unsatisfying in whatever aspects, there is nothing I can do about that, can’t I?
Try to keep to three words with listing things with a comma. "Can't I?" seems very casual / rude , especially in a work context. |
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7. Have you ever changed your work before? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have been working for my company ever since I graduated from university. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But when I was still studying, I worked part-time and hopped jobs rather frequently.
Try not to start a sentence with "But", |
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This is because I could only find a labor job during that time, but my standard of fitness was low so I couldn’t keep up with one job for a long time and had to take a break and then found another job when I felt better. This is because I could only find a laborious job during that time, |
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8. Do you think you will change your job in the future? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Actually, I am preparing to become an English teacher at the moment.
If this is for a written essay please try to stick to standard written English not spoken English. |
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I have already informed my uncle that I cannot work for him anymore and that he should find a replacement before the end of this year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Do you get on well with your co-workers? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Well, I guess the answer is yes if you consider having no dispute or conflict as getting on well.
Same as above, your writing is very causal like you are talking to a friend. |
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I work at home for a small company that has less than ten employees, and I only need to contact two of them for work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is no interaction between the three of us except for work-related purposes, and our duties hardly affect each other, which means if one of us performs badly at work, the others’ workloads or salaries will be unaffected. There is no interaction between the three of us except for work-related purposes |
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So there is nothing for us to argue about.
'Therefore' is more formal than 'so'. |
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Sometimes I really feel like I was working with robots, not human beings.
I would remove this line as it could be taken as rude, as if you are insulting your co-workers. |
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