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PLEASE REVIEW MY ESSAY.

Do you miss being a student?
No, I don’t. I’m just relieved that I no longer need to sit through six hours of boring classes every weekday and memorize long, intricate formulas in math, chemistry, and physics.
Why did you choose to do that type of work?
Well, as I am an introverted person, I feel uncomfortable every time I have a conversation with strangers, especially face-to-face. So I knew that I would have difficulty socializing at work. Because of that, I figured out it would be better if I got a job that allowed me to work at home and rarely need to have interactions with coworkers. So that was the reason why I chose to become an online salesperson, as I only need to contact my customers online and allow me to have After contemplating for a long time, I chose to become an online salesperson as it only required me to contact my customers online and send their orders to the shipping department.
4. What do you find most interesting about your work/job?
The most interesting about my job is that I can gain a sense of accomplishment every time I successfully persuade a customer to make an order, as I feel like I have made a contribution, even though insignificant, to promote my country’s culture. Knowing that there are many people around the world who love our traditional folk paintings makes me feel really proud.

5. What is the most important quality of a co-worker/colleague?
To me, the foremost quality that a co-worker must have is work responsibility, as responsible workers will strive to perform their daily duties well and not dump their work on other people or blame others when an error happens. It is fine for me even if my co-workers are strict or have any kind of negative personality that are unpleasant to be around as long as they finish their duties so that I can just only focus on completing mine.

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PLEASE REVIEW MY ESSAY.

Do you miss being a student?

No, I don’t.

I’m just relieved that I no longer need to sit through six hours of boring classes every weekday and memorize long, intricate formulas in maths, chemistry, and physics.

Well, as I am an introverted person, I feel uncomfortable every time I have a conversation with strangers, especially face-to-face.

So I knew that I would have difficulty socializing at work.

Because of that, I figured out it would be better if I got a job that allowed me to work at home and rarely need to havehad less interactions with co-workers.

So that was the reason why I chose to become an online salesperson, as I only need to contact my customers online and allow me to have After contemplating for a long time, I chose to become an online salesperson as it only requireds me to contact my customers online and send their orders to the shipping department from home.

I have removed parts of the sentence for more clarity.

4. What do you find most interesting about your work/job?

The most interesting part about my job is that I can gain a sense of accomplishment every time I successfully persuade a customer to make an order, as. Even though it may be insignificant, I feel like I have made a contribution, even though insignificant, to promote my country’s culture.

Knowing that there are many people around the world who love our traditional folk paintings makes me feel really proud.

5. What is the most important quality of a co-worker/colleague?

To me, the foremosmost important quality that a co-worker must have isat work is responsibility, a. As responsible workers will strive to perform their daily duties well and not dump their work on other people or blame others when an errormistakes happens.

It is fine for me even if my co-workers are strict or, have any kind of negative personality that, or are unpleasant to be around, as long as they finish their duties so that I can just only focus on completing mine.

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Well done, your English is very natural!

PLEASE REVIEW MY ESSAY.

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Do you miss being a student?

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No, I don’t.

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I’m just relieved that I no longer need to sit through six hours of boring classes every weekday and memorize long, intricate formulas in math, chemistry, and physics.

I’m just relieved that I no longer need to sit through six hours of boring classes every weekday and memorize long, intricate formulas in maths, chemistry, and physics.

Why did you choose to do that type of work?

Well, as I am an introverted person, I feel uncomfortable every time I have a conversation with strangers, especially face-to-face.

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So I knew that I would have difficulty socializing at work.

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Because of that, I figured out it would be better if I got a job that allowed me to work at home and rarely need to have interactions with coworkers.

Because of that, I figured out it would be better if I got a job that allowed me to work at home and rarely need to havehad less interactions with co-workers.

So that was the reason why I chose to become an online salesperson, as I only need to contact my customers online and allow me to have After contemplating for a long time, I chose to become an online salesperson as it only required me to contact my customers online and send their orders to the shipping department.

So that was the reason why I chose to become an online salesperson, as I only need to contact my customers online and allow me to have After contemplating for a long time, I chose to become an online salesperson as it only requireds me to contact my customers online and send their orders to the shipping department from home.

I have removed parts of the sentence for more clarity.

4. What do you find most interesting about your work/job?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The most interesting about my job is that I can gain a sense of accomplishment every time I successfully persuade a customer to make an order, as I feel like I have made a contribution, even though insignificant, to promote my country’s culture.

The most interesting part about my job is that I can gain a sense of accomplishment every time I successfully persuade a customer to make an order, as. Even though it may be insignificant, I feel like I have made a contribution, even though insignificant, to promote my country’s culture.

Knowing that there are many people around the world who love our traditional folk paintings makes me feel really proud.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

5. What is the most important quality of a co-worker/colleague?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To me, the foremost quality that a co-worker must have is work responsibility, as responsible workers will strive to perform their daily duties well and not dump their work on other people or blame others when an error happens.

To me, the foremosmost important quality that a co-worker must have isat work is responsibility, a. As responsible workers will strive to perform their daily duties well and not dump their work on other people or blame others when an errormistakes happens.

It is fine for me even if my co-workers are strict or have any kind of negative personality that are unpleasant to be around as long as they finish their duties so that I can just only focus on completing mine.

It is fine for me even if my co-workers are strict or, have any kind of negative personality that, or are unpleasant to be around, as long as they finish their duties so that I can just only focus on completing mine.

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