Nov. 18, 2022
Please review my essay.
Do you work or study?
I graduated a few years ago and am now in full-time employment.
What is your job?
I work at home as a salesperson for a company owned by my uncle which sells Vietnamese traditional paintings oversea.
Do you enjoy your job?
No, not really. Although it is quite an undemanding job as all I have to do is send promotional emails or messages to potential customers and answer their questions about the products, I find it is rather mundane and monotonous, and lacks advancement opportunities. I’m just doing it to earn a living really.
What do you dislike about your job?
I feel it is quite monotonous as I have to perform the same mundane daily tasks every day. But I think that is what working is like. Besides, I really hate it when my customers contact me after work hours. All I want to do after a busy day at work is lay on my couch reading web novels or watching YouTube videos. I don’t want to stop in the middle of enjoying myself and reply to some questions that I have answered a hundred times before.
Please review my essay.
I wouldn't call this an essay. To me,it's looks more like a Question and Answer.
Normally, an essay is usually two pages or more and this is not the format for an essay.
I graduated a few years ago and am now in full-time employment.
You can also say " am now a full-time employee."
I work at home as a salesperson for a company owned by my uncle which sells Vietnamese traditional Vietnamese paintings oversea.
I’m really just doing it to earn a living really.
All I want to do after a busy day at work is to lay on my couch as I reading web novels or watching YouTube videos.
I graduated a few years ago and am now in full-time employment.
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I graduated a few years ago and am now in full-time employment.
Hello, I just wanted to add that the sentence you have written above is perfectly correct, I'm not sure if the previous reviewer made that clear. In fact, I prefer this usage rather than 'employed full-time' which is a little more ambiguous sounding to me. Just my opinion, hope it helps! Keep going!
Nov. 18, 2022
Thank you a lot.
I graduated a few years ago and am now inemployed full-time employment.
I work at home as a salesperson for a company owned by my uncle which sells Vietnamese traditional Vietnamese paintings oversea.
I don’t want to stop in the middle of enjoying myself and then reply to some questions that I have answered a hundred times before.
Nov. 18, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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Please review my essay. Please review my essay. I wouldn't call this an essay. To me,it's looks more like a Question and Answer. Normally, an essay is usually two pages or more and this is not the format for an essay. |
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Do you work or study? |
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I graduated a few years ago and am now in full-time employment. I graduated a few years ago and am now This sentence has been marked as perfect! I graduated a few years ago and am now in full-time employment. You can also say " am now a full-time employee." |
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What is your job? |
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I work at home as a salesperson for a company owned by my uncle which sells Vietnamese traditional paintings oversea. I work at home as a salesperson for a company owned by my uncle which sells I work at home as a salesperson for a company owned by my uncle which sells |
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Do you enjoy your job? |
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No, not really. |
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Although it is quite an undemanding job as all I have to do is send promotional emails or messages to potential customers and answer their questions about the products, I find it is rather mundane and monotonous, and lacks advancement opportunities. |
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I’m just doing it to earn a living really. I’m really just doing it to earn a living |
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What do you dislike about your job? |
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I feel it is quite monotonous as I have to perform the same mundane daily tasks every day. |
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But I think that is what working is like. |
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Besides, I really hate it when my customers contact me after work hours. |
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All I want to do after a busy day at work is lay on my couch reading web novels or watching YouTube videos. All I want to do after a busy day at work is to lay on my couch as I read |
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I don’t want to stop in the middle of enjoying myself and reply to some questions that I have answered a hundred times before. I don’t want to stop in the middle of enjoying myself and then reply to some questions that I have answered a hundred times before. |
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