Nov. 16, 2022
Please review my essay
Why do some people not like quiet places?
Well, there are many possibilities. Some people are extroverted and like to spend time in crowded places enjoying the exciting and lively atmosphere. These people may feel lonely without being surrounded by a group of people. Others might have a sense of danger in a place with a lack of noise. For example, they may be afraid of walking through empty alleyways or parking lots.
Do you need a quiet place when you are working?
Yes, I do. I feel more concentrated on my work if there is no sound around distracting my thought. However, I work from home, so there are times when my house is quite noisy when my parents are outside of work. My mom puts the TV volume really high, and my dad plays YouTube videos on his phone extremely loudly. I find that when I’m working under these conditions, my work productivity really suffers.
Why do people like to spend time in quiet places?
I think for all sorts of reasons. One is that many people, like me, feel that the absence of sound can boost their work productivity. They can concentrate more. That’s why libraries are packed with students before exams. Besides, modern people are surrounded by the sound of vehicles, devices, and the crowd. So sometimes, they want to spend time in quiet café and parks to get a rest from the hustle and bustle of life.
5. Do you know anyone who likes noise
My aunt always has her television on really loud. I think this is because she lives alone, and she does this to create a livelier atmosphere around her empty house. My brother likes to play music on speakers with the maximum volume. I think all my next-door neighbors can hear it clearly. And my dad, he loves singing karaoke. He bought two massive speakers from Sony which are as big as my seven-year-old nephew. These two produce sound waves that can vibrate the whole house. My ears really suffer from this.
Please review my essay
Why do some people not like quiet places?
Well, there are many possibilities.
Some people are extroverted and like to spend time in crowded places enjoying the exciting and lively atmosphere.
These people may feel lonely without being surrounded by a group of people.
OHowever, others might have a sense of danger in a place with a lack of noiseget anxious in quiet places.
For example, they may be afraid of walking through empty alleyways or parking lots.
Do you need a quiet place when you are working?
Yes, I do.
I feel more concentrated on my work if there is no sound around distracting my thoughts.
However, I work from home, so there are times when my house is quite noisy when my parents are outside ofnot working.
My mom puts the TV volume really high, and my dad plays YouTube videos on his phone extremely loudly.
I find that when I’m working under these conditions, my work productivity really suffers.
Your sentence was not wrong, but it sounds better to not repeat "working [...] work".
Why do people like to spend time in quiet places?
I think forthere are all sorts of reasons.
One is that many people, like me, feel that the absence of sound can boost their work productivity.
They can concentrate more.
That’s why libraries are packed with students before exams.
Besides, modern people are surrounded by the sound of vehicles, devices, and the crowds.
So sometimes, they want to spend time in quiet cafés and parks to get a rest from the hustle and bustle of life.
5. Do you know anyone who likes noise
My aunt always has her television on really loud.
I think this is because she lives alone, and she does this to create a livelier atmosphere around her empty house.
My brother likes to play music on speakers with theat maximum volume.
I think all my next-door neighbors can hear it clearlyright through the walls.
And my dad, he loves singing karaoke.
He bought two massive speakers from Sony which are as big as my seven-year-old nephew.
These two produce sound waves that can vibrate the whole house.
My ears really suffer from this.
Nov. 17, 2022
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