Nov. 6, 2022
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What types of buildings are there in your city?
In the affluent neighborhood of my hometown, Buon Ma Thuot city, you can see all kinds of buildings that are associated with developed urban areas, such as skyscrapers, high-rise apartments, and large office and factory buildings. The city also has some slums packed with weak buildings that look like they will fall down at any moment. But what makes it different from others is that you can spot many traditional stilt houses made of wood or bamboo in some ethnic minority villages.
Do you prefer old or new buildings?
With no question, I would go for old ones, for both safety and convenience reasons. It is unavoidable that houses will be degraded over time, so old houses are certainly less safe than new houses. Also, I believe that construction design and materials evolve in a way that can fulfill the changing need of people. So I would argue that modern houses are more comfortable and safe to live in than historic ones. Like, most of them are designed to be able to provide electricity to all rooms, which is something that you can hardly enjoy in an old building.
Are historical buildings important?
Absolutely, I think they are of great importance, and governments therefore should pay more attention to preserving them. I believe that such buildings represent the history and culture of the past, and they promote a shared identity for the community. They also can attract visitors and benefit the local tourism industry due to their unique character.
Would you like to live in an old building?
No, absolutely not. I have seen so many people talk about how their old houses or apartments are so inconvenient to live in, either on the news or on YouTube. Like, the ancient houses in certain areas in Hanoi, which are protected by the law against demolition, are notorious for being so uncomfortable to live in that the owners have many times protested to gain the right to reconstruct them. Similarly, while most old apartment buildings in France give a unique gothic vibe to the city and are very pleasant to look at, I have watched some people that have rented them reviewing what living there is like on YouTube. They are obviously not satisfied at all with the poor ventilation and no elevator system.
Please review my essay
What types of buildings are there in your city?
In the affluent neighborhood of my hometown, Buon Ma Thuot city, you can see all kinds of buildings that are associated with developed urban areas, such as skyscrapers, high-rise apartments, and large office and factory buildings.
The city also has some slums packed with weakflimsy buildings that look like they willcould fall down at any moment.
"Weak" is not usually used to describe buildings, although it is technically correct.
But what makes it different from others is that you can spot many traditional stilt houses made of wood or bamboo in some ethnic minority villages.
Do you prefer old or new buildings?
With no question, I would go for old ones, for both safety and convenience reasons.
It is unavoidable that houses will be degraded over time, so old houses are certainly less safe than new houses.
Also, I believe that construction design and materials evolve in a way that can fulfill the changing needs of people.
So I would argue that modern houses are more comfortable and safe to live in than historic ones.
LikFor example, most of them are designed to be able to provide electricity to all rooms, which is something that you can hardly enjoy in an old building.
Are historical buildings important?
Absolutely, I think they are of great importance, and governments should therefore should pay more attention to preserving them.
I believe that such buildings represent the history and culture of the past, and they promote a shared identity for the community.
They also can attract visitors and benefit the local tourism industry due to their unique character.
Would you like to live in an old building?
No, absolutely not.
I have seen so many people talk about how their old houses or apartments are so inconvenient to live in, either on the news or on YouTube.
LikFor example, the ancient houses in certain areas in Hanoi, which are protected by the law against demolition, are notorious for being so uncomfortable to live in that the owners have many times protested to gain the right to reconstruct them.
Similarly, while most old apartment buildings in France give a unique gothic vibe to the city and are very pleasant to look at, I have watched some people that have rented them reviewing what living there is like on YouTube.
They are obviously not satisfied at all with the poor ventilation and the lack of ano elevator system.
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All your errors were minor and it was overall written very well, and I enjoyed learning more about the buildings of Hanoi!
Nov. 7, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I really appreciate your kindness.
In the affluent neighborhood of my hometown, Buon Ma Thuot city, you can see all kinds of buildings that are associated with developed urban areas, such as skyscrapers, high-rise apartments, and large offices, and factory buildings.
But what makes it different from others is that you can spot many traditional stilt houses, made of wood or bamboo, in some ethnic minority villages.
Also, I believe that construction design and materials evolve in a way that can fulfill the changing needs of people.
LikFor example, most of them are designed to be able to provide electricity to all rooms, which is something that you can hardly enjoy in an old building.
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Excellent Job! I learned something new as well :)
Nov. 6, 2022
Thank you so much for your kind review. I am very grateful.
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In the affluent neighborhood of my hometown, Buon Ma Thuot city, you can see all kinds of buildings that are associated with developed urban areas, such as skyscrapers, high-rise apartments, and large office and factory buildings. In the affluent neighborhood of my hometown, Buon Ma Thuot city, you can see all kinds of buildings that are associated with developed urban areas, such as skyscrapers, high-rise apartments, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The city also has some slums packed with weak buildings that look like they will fall down at any moment. The city also has some slums packed with "Weak" is not usually used to describe buildings, although it is technically correct. |
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But what makes it different from others is that you can spot many traditional stilt houses made of wood or bamboo in some ethnic minority villages. But what makes it different from others is that you can spot many traditional stilt houses, made of wood or bamboo, in some ethnic minority villages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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With no question, I would go for old ones, for both safety and convenience reasons. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is unavoidable that houses will be degraded over time, so old houses are certainly less safe than new houses. It is unavoidable that houses will |
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Also, I believe that construction design and materials evolve in a way that can fulfill the changing need of people. Also, I believe that construction design and materials evolve in a way that can fulfill the changing needs of people. Also, I believe that construction design and materials evolve in a way that can fulfill the changing needs of people. |
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So I would argue that modern houses are more comfortable and safe to live in than historic ones. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like, most of them are designed to be able to provide electricity to all rooms, which is something that you can hardly enjoy in an old building.
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Are historical buildings important? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Absolutely, I think they are of great importance, and governments therefore should pay more attention to preserving them. Absolutely, I think they are of great importance, and governments should therefore |
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I believe that such buildings represent the history and culture of the past, and they promote a shared identity for the community. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They also can attract visitors and benefit the local tourism industry due to their unique character. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Would you like to live in an old building? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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No, absolutely not. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have seen so many people talk about how their old houses or apartments are so inconvenient to live in, either on the news or on YouTube. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like, the ancient houses in certain areas in Hanoi, which are protected by the law against demolition, are notorious for being so uncomfortable to live in that the owners have many times protested to gain the right to reconstruct them.
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Similarly, while most old apartment buildings in France give a unique gothic vibe to the city and are very pleasant to look at, I have watched some people that have rented them reviewing what living there is like on YouTube. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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