Nov. 6, 2022
Please review my essay.
How often do you wear a watch?
Actually, I never wear a watch. However, when I was in secondary school, my uncle gave me one as a gift from his business trip to China. So I wore it from time to time, but I threw it away two months later because the strap broke.
What was your first watch look like?
If my memory serves me right, it had a bright red plastic strap and a mickey mouse graphic on the dial. It looked really childish and cheap. I did not like wearing it at all, but I still wore it sometimes, especially when my uncle was around, as it is his gift.
What type of watch do you prefer?
I would prefer a rose gold watch with a real leather strap that would feel comfortable on my skin. And I also want the strap to be ultra-slim so that it would not look strangely big on my thin wrist. I bought one exactly like that from an American brand called Fossil, which is famous for delivering high-quality, affordable watches, for my younger sister on her birthday.
Did anyone give you a watch as a gift?
As I have just said, my uncle gifted me a watch after returning from a business trip to china. He said that he bought it in a gift shop at Shanghai Disneyland. But he really did not take my age into account; the mickey mouse graphic on its dial is totally not suited for me at that time, a secondary student.
Why do people wear expensive watches?
I guess that people buy costly watches for all sorts of reasons; Some may do this because they believe that high price also means high quality. But I think for most people, especially men, watches from high-end brands are a necessary symbol to showcase their social status and wealth. They may want people to think highly of them.
Please review my essay.
However, when I was in secondary school, my uncle gave me one as a gift from his business trip to China.
So I wore it from time to time, but I threw it away two months later because the strap broke.
What wasdid your first watch look like?
If my memory serves me right, it had a bright red plastic strap and a mMickey mMouse graphic on the dial.
It looked really childish and cheap.
As I have just said, my uncle gifted me a watch after returning from a business trip to cChina.
He said that he bought it in a gift shop at Shanghaithe Disneyland in Shanghai.
The original was OK but this sounds more fluent.
But he really did not take my age into account; the mMickey mMouse graphic on its dial is totally not suited for me at that time, as I was a secondary student.
Why do people wear expensive watches?
I guess that people buy costly watches for all sorts of reasons; Some may do this because they believe that high price also means high quality.
But I think for most people, especially men, watches from high-end brands are a necessary symbol to showcase their social status and wealth.
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Nov. 6, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
What wasdid your first watch look like?
If my memory serves me right, it had a bright red plastic strap and an image of mickey mouse graphic on the dial.
I did not like wearing it at all, but I still wore it sometimes, especially when my uncle was around, as it iwas his gift to me.
And I also want the strap to be ultra-slim so that it would not look strangeoddly big on my thin wrist.
Strangely and oddly mean the same thing but oddly sounds more natural with the word big.
I bought one exactly like that from an American brand called Fossil, which iso were famous for delivering high-quality, and affordable watches, for my younger sister on her birthday.
As I have just saidsaid before, my uncle gifted me a watch after returning from a business trip to china.
Using 'as I have just said' can sound rude.
He said that he bought it inat a gift shop atin Shanghai Disneyland.
But he really did not take my age into account; the image of mickey mouse graphic on its dial is totally not suited for me at that tidid not suit me, a secondary student, at that time.
I guess that people buy costly watches for all sorts of reasons;. Some may do ithis because they believe that higher the price also means higher the quality.
Nov. 6, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I really appreciate your help.
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How often do you wear a watch? |
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So I wore it from time to time, but I threw it away two months later because the strap broke. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What was your first watch look like? What What |
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If my memory serves me right, it had a bright red plastic strap and a mickey mouse graphic on the dial. If my memory serves me right, it had a bright red plastic strap and an image of mickey mouse If my memory serves me right, it had a bright red plastic strap and a |
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It looked really childish and cheap. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I did not like wearing it at all, but I still wore it sometimes, especially when my uncle was around, as it is his gift. I did not like wearing it at all, but I still wore it sometimes, especially when my uncle was around |
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What type of watch do you prefer? |
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I would prefer a rose gold watch with a real leather strap that would feel comfortable on my skin. |
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And I also want the strap to be ultra-slim so that it would not look strangely big on my thin wrist. And I also want the strap to be ultra-slim so that it would not look Strangely and oddly mean the same thing but oddly sounds more natural with the word big. |
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I bought one exactly like that from an American brand called Fossil, which is famous for delivering high-quality, affordable watches, for my younger sister on her birthday. I bought one exactly like that from an American brand called Fossil, wh |
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As I have just said, my uncle gifted me a watch after returning from a business trip to china. As I Using 'as I have just said' can sound rude. As I have just said, my uncle gifted me a watch after returning from a business trip to |
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He said that he bought it in a gift shop at Shanghai Disneyland. He said that he bought it He said that he bought it in a gift shop at The original was OK but this sounds more fluent. |
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But he really did not take my age into account; the mickey mouse graphic on its dial is totally not suited for me at that time, a secondary student. But he really did not take my age into account; the image of mickey mouse But he really did not take my age into account; the |
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I guess that people buy costly watches for all sorts of reasons; Some may do this because they believe that high price also means high quality. I guess This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I think for most people, especially men, watches from high-end brands are a necessary symbol to showcase their social status and wealth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They may want people to think highly of them. |
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