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Nov. 6, 2022

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Do you have a talent, or something you are good at?

I do not know if this can count as a talent but I can read really fast. I do not count exactly how many words I can read in a minute, but at least I’m sure I read faster than all my friends and acquaintances.

 

 

Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
It definitely was from a young age. I realized that I can read significantly faster than others around me as soon as I was able to read fluently, around 7 or 8. I, just like every other kid, loved reading novels and comics, but my parents could not afford to buy me any. So I used to borrow them from my friends after they finished reading, or if I could not wait to read, I read together with my friends. However, when I had already finished reading the whole page, they still did not read half of it. It happened all the time with all my friends, regardless of their age, and that is when I recognized my own talent – reading fast.

 

Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
 Maybe. I think it would help if I choose to work as a proofreader, or jobs requiring reading long documents. But the odds are high as I am currently preparing to become an English teacher, and do not have the intention to switch to other careers if am hired.

 

Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?

I suppose not. While I am certain that my siblings read much slower than me, I am not really sure about whether or not my parents can read fast because I rarely see them read; their job does not require reading, they do not have time to read and they are not even interested in reading.

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Do you have a talent, or something you are good at?

I do not know if this can counts as a talent but I can read really fast.

I do not countn't know exactly how many words I can read in a minute, but at least I’m sure that I read faster than all my friends and acquaintances.

or you could say, I'm sure that I can read at least as fast as my friends.

Was itDid you mastered it recently or when you were younger?

It definitely wmas fromtered it at a young age.

I realized that I canould read significantly faster than others around memy peers as soon as I was able to read fluently, at around age 7 or 8.

I, jJust like every other kid,child, I loved reading novels and comics, but my parents could not afford to buy me any.

So I used to borrow them from my friends after they finished reading them, or if I could not wait to read, I read them together with my friends.

However, when I had already finished reading thea whole page, they still dihad not read half of it.

It happened all the time with all my friends, regardless of their age, and that is when I recognized my own talent – reading fast.

Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work?

I think it would help if I choose to work as a proofreader, or jobsin a job that requiringes reading long documents.

But the odds are high as I am currently preparing to become an English teacher, and do not have the intentiond to switch to other careers if am hired.

Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?

I suppose notdon't think so.

While I am certain that my siblings read much slower than me, I am not really sure about whether or not my parents can read fast because I rarely see them read; t. Their jobs does not require reading, and they do not havmake time to read andbecause they are not even interested in readingit.

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maymaymay_

Nov. 6, 2022

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Please review my essay


Do you have a talent, or something you are good at?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I do not know if this can count as a talent but I can read really fast.


I do not know if this can counts as a talent but I can read really fast.

I do not count exactly how many words I can read in a minute, but at least I’m sure I read faster than all my friends and acquaintances.


I do not countn't know exactly how many words I can read in a minute, but at least I’m sure that I read faster than all my friends and acquaintances.

or you could say, I'm sure that I can read at least as fast as my friends.

Was it mastered recently or when you were young?


Was itDid you mastered it recently or when you were younger?

It definitely was from a young age.


It definitely wmas fromtered it at a young age.

I realized that I can read significantly faster than others around me as soon as I was able to read fluently, around 7 or 8.


I realized that I canould read significantly faster than others around memy peers as soon as I was able to read fluently, at around age 7 or 8.

I, just like every other kid, loved reading novels and comics, but my parents could not afford to buy me any.


I, jJust like every other kid,child, I loved reading novels and comics, but my parents could not afford to buy me any.

So I used to borrow them from my friends after they finished reading, or if I could not wait to read, I read together with my friends.


So I used to borrow them from my friends after they finished reading them, or if I could not wait to read, I read them together with my friends.

However, when I had already finished reading the whole page, they still did not read half of it.


However, when I had already finished reading thea whole page, they still dihad not read half of it.

It happened all the time with all my friends, regardless of their age, and that is when I recognized my own talent – reading fast.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why?


Maybe.


I think it would help if I choose to work as a proofreader, or jobs requiring reading long documents.


I think it would help if I choose to work as a proofreader, or jobsin a job that requiringes reading long documents.

But the odds are high as I am currently preparing to become an English teacher, and do not have the intention to switch to other careers if am hired.


But the odds are high as I am currently preparing to become an English teacher, and do not have the intentiond to switch to other careers if am hired.

Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I suppose not.


I suppose notdon't think so.

While I am certain that my siblings read much slower than me, I am not really sure about whether or not my parents can read fast because I rarely see them read; their job does not require reading, they do not have time to read and they are not even interested in reading.


While I am certain that my siblings read much slower than me, I am not really sure about whether or not my parents can read fast because I rarely see them read; t. Their jobs does not require reading, and they do not havmake time to read andbecause they are not even interested in readingit.

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