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Nov. 5, 2022

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Where is your favorite place to sit?
I have never really thought about that. But if I have to choose one, it would be the chair on the front porch of my house. The chair is made of wood with a straight back, so it is rather uncomfortable to sit on. But I can still spend hours sitting on it because it is seated next to our fish pond, in which I raise three beautiful koi fishes. Looking at them swimming so peacefully is so calming and relaxing after a busy day at work. 

 

Do you always sit down for a long time?
 

I think I sit down for a whole day except when doing household chores and sleeping. I work from home, so I spend at least 8 hours sitting on my desk chair working on my computer. The sitting place changes to my couch for other times of the day, where I do nothing but scroll through my phone. 

 

Do you feel sleepy when you are sitting down?

I think it depends. If I have not had enough sleep then I will definitely feel drowsy whether I am sitting down or standing up. It also depends on the time of the day, not the position that makes me sleepy; the times that I feel quite dozy are the two hours after I wake up and after I just have lunch.

 

When you were a kid, did you usually sit on the floor?
 

Absolutely. When I was a child, I usually sat on the floor playing with my toys and crawled around and made a mess around the house. I think that is what children do. They often have trouble sitting still on a chair, so parents usually let them play on the floor.

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Where is your favorite place to sit?

I have never really thought about that.

But if I have to choose one, it would be the chair on the front porch of my house.

The chair is made of wood withand has a straight back, so it is rather uncomfortable to sit on.

But I can still spend hours sitting on it because it is seated next to our fish pond, in which I raise three beautiful koi fishes.

Looking at them swimming so peacefully is so calming and relaxing after a busy day at work.

Do you always sit down for a long time?

I think I sit down for athe whole day except when doing household chores and sleeping.

I work from home, so I spend at least 8 hours sitting on my desk chair working on my computer.

The sitting place changes to my couch foron other times of the day, where I do nothing but scroll through my phone.

Do you feel sleepy when you are sitting down?

I think it depends.

If I have not had enough sleep then I will definitely feel drowsy whether or not I am sitting down or standing up.

It also depends on the time of the day, not the position that makes me sleepy; the times that I feel quite dozy are the two hours after I wake up and just after I just have lunch.

When you were a kid, did you usually sit on the floor?

Absolutely.

When I was a child, I usually sat on the floor playing with my toys and crawled around and made a mess around the house.

They often have trouble sitting still on a chair, so parents usually let them play on the floor.

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Where is your favorite place to sit?


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I have never really thought about that.


I have never really thought about that.

But if I have to choose one, it would be the chair on the front porch of my house.


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The chair is made of wood with a straight back, so it is rather uncomfortable to sit on.


The chair is made of wood withand has a straight back, so it is rather uncomfortable to sit on.

But I can still spend hours sitting on it because it is seated next to our fish pond, in which I raise three beautiful koi fishes.


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Looking at them swimming so peacefully is so calming and relaxing after a busy day at work.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Do you always sit down for a long time?


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I think I sit down for a whole day except when doing household chores and sleeping.


I think I sit down for athe whole day except when doing household chores and sleeping.

I work from home, so I spend at least 8 hours sitting on my desk chair working on my computer.


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The sitting place changes to my couch for other times of the day, where I do nothing but scroll through my phone.


The sitting place changes to my couch foron other times of the day, where I do nothing but scroll through my phone.

Do you feel sleepy when you are sitting down?


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I think it depends.


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If I have not had enough sleep then I will definitely feel drowsy whether I am sitting down or standing up.


If I have not had enough sleep then I will definitely feel drowsy whether or not I am sitting down or standing up.

It also depends on the time of the day, not the position that makes me sleepy; the times that I feel quite dozy are the two hours after I wake up and after I just have lunch.


It also depends on the time of the day, not the position that makes me sleepy; the times that I feel quite dozy are the two hours after I wake up and just after I just have lunch.

When you were a kid, did you usually sit on the floor?


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Absolutely.


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When I was a child, I usually sat on the floor playing with my toys and crawled around and made a mess around the house.


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I think that is what children do.


They often have trouble sitting still on a chair, so parents usually let them play on the floor.


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