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Where is your favorite place to meet with your friends?

Both I and my friend, Quynh, love seafood. So most of the time when we have the chance to hang out, the street food stall called Co Ba, which is located in our hometown city central square and serves a range of snail dishes and grilled squid, is our number one place to go. The food prices there are quite reasonable, and the view is great as we can look into the square which has spectacular light displays during the night.

Do you think there are some places more suitable for meeting with others?

To me, it depends on whom you are meeting with. For hanging out with friends, I guess café and street food vendors are places to go for young people in Vietnam due to their inexpensive prices and chilled-out atmosphere. With coworkers or date partners, I suppose a fancier place would be better, such as restaurants or a more luxurious café.

3. Are there any differences between your favorite meeting places in the present and in your childhood?

They are totally different. When I was a child, I hung out with the kids in our neighborhood, and our houses were the go-to place. So the houses with the largest living room and the most toys would be the most favorite for us. Because we all can earn money now, we have a wider choice of meeting places. And our go-to place now is a food venue that serves the kind of food that we all crave at that moment.


4. Why are some meeting places better than others?

I guess the vibe, atmosphere, food, beverages, and services of a place are all important aspects when deciding which meeting places are better. So a restaurant with good food and services, and a relaxing atmosphere would certainly be preferred over one with rude waiters, bad food and a stifling ambiance.

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The food prices there are quite reasonable, and the view is great as we can look into the square which haith its spectacular light displays during the night.

Tighter association.

So a restaurant with good food and services, and a relaxing atmosphere would certainly be preferred tover one with rude waiters, bad food and a stifling ambiance.

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Please review my essay

Where is your favorite place to meet with your friends?

Both I and my friend, Quynh, and I love seafood.

It’s polite to refer to your friend first.

So most of the time when we have the chance to hang out, we go to the street food stall called Co Ba, which is located in our hometown city. It is in the central city square and serves a range of snail dishes and grilled squid, and it is our number one place to go.

It’s a very long sentence which I would break up into two.

The food prices there are quite reasonable, and the view is great, as we can look into the square which has a spectacular light displays dur ing the night.

Do you think there are some places more suitable for meeting with others?

To me, it depends on whom you are meeting with.

For hanging out with friends, I guess café and street food vendors are places to go for young people in Vietnam due to their inexpensive prices and chilled-out atmosphere.

With co-workers or date partnersfor a date, I suppose a fancier place would be better, such as restaurants or a more luxurious café, would be better.

3. Are there any differences between your favorite meeting places in the present and in your childhood?

They are totally different.

When I was a child, I hung out with the kids in our neighborhood, and our houses were the go-to place.

I would normally not put a comma before the word and.

So the houses with the largest living room and the most number of toys would be the mostour favourite for us.

Because we all cancan all earn money now, we have a wider choice of meeting places.

And our go-to place now is a food venue that serves the kind of food that we all crave at that moment.

4. Why are some meeting places better than others?

I guess the vibe, atmosphere, food, beverages, and services of a place are all important aspects when deciding which meeting places are better.

So a restaurant with good food and, services, and a relaxing atmosphere would certainly be preferred over one with rude waiters, bad food and a stifling ambiance.

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Where is your favorite place to meet with your friends?

Both I and my friend, Quynh, love seafood.

So most of the time when we have the chancare able to hang out, the street food stall called "Co Ba,", and which is located in our hometown city central square and serves a range of snail dishes and grilled squid, is our number one place to go.

The food prices there are quite reasonable, and the view is great as we can look into the square which has spectacular light displays during the nightevery evening.

Do you think there are someother places that are more suitable for meeting with others?

ToFor me, it depends on whom you are meeting with.

ForWhen hanging out with friends, I guess café and street food vendors arestalls are good places to go for young people in Vietnam due to their inexpensive prices and chilled-out atmosphere.

With coworkers or date partnerswhen you go on a date, I suppose a fancier place would be better, such as restaurants or a more luxurious café.

3. Are there any differences between your favorite meeting places in the present and in your childhood?

They are totally different.

When I was a child, I hung out with the kids in our neighborhood, and our houses were the go-to place.

So the houses with the largest living rooms and the most toys would be the mobest favoriteplaces for us.

Because we all can earn money now, we have a wider choice of meeting places.

And oOur go-to place now is a food venue that serves the kind of food that we all crave at that given moment.

It is rare to start a sentence with "and" in English.

4. Why are some meeting places better than others?

I guess the vibe, atmosphere, food, beverages, and services of a placwithin any given venue are all important aspects when deciding which meeting places are better.

So a restaurant with good food and services, and a relaxing atmosphere, would certainly be preferred over one with rude waiters, bad food and a stifling ambianctmosphere.

Ambiance sounds more formal than "atmosphere"

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Where is your favorite place to meet with your friends?


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Where is your favorite place to meet with your friends?

Both I and my friend, Quynh, love seafood.


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Both I and my friend, Quynh, and I love seafood.

It’s polite to refer to your friend first.

So most of the time when we have the chance to hang out, the street food stall called Co Ba, which is located in our hometown city central square and serves a range of snail dishes and grilled squid, is our number one place to go.


So most of the time when we have the chancare able to hang out, the street food stall called "Co Ba,", and which is located in our hometown city central square and serves a range of snail dishes and grilled squid, is our number one place to go.

So most of the time when we have the chance to hang out, we go to the street food stall called Co Ba, which is located in our hometown city. It is in the central city square and serves a range of snail dishes and grilled squid, and it is our number one place to go.

It’s a very long sentence which I would break up into two.

The food prices there are quite reasonable, and the view is great as we can look into the square which has spectacular light displays during the night.


The food prices there are quite reasonable, and the view is great as we can look into the square which has spectacular light displays during the nightevery evening.

The food prices there are quite reasonable, and the view is great, as we can look into the square which has a spectacular light displays dur ing the night.

The food prices there are quite reasonable, and the view is great as we can look into the square which haith its spectacular light displays during the night.

Tighter association.

Do you think there are some places more suitable for meeting with others?


Do you think there are someother places that are more suitable for meeting with others?

Do you think there are some places more suitable for meeting with others?

To me, it depends on whom you are meeting with.


ToFor me, it depends on whom you are meeting with.

To me, it depends on whom you are meeting with.

For hanging out with friends, I guess café and street food vendors are places to go for young people in Vietnam due to their inexpensive prices and chilled-out atmosphere.


ForWhen hanging out with friends, I guess café and street food vendors arestalls are good places to go for young people in Vietnam due to their inexpensive prices and chilled-out atmosphere.

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With coworkers or date partners, I suppose a fancier place would be better, such as restaurants or a more luxurious café.


With coworkers or date partnerswhen you go on a date, I suppose a fancier place would be better, such as restaurants or a more luxurious café.

With co-workers or date partnersfor a date, I suppose a fancier place would be better, such as restaurants or a more luxurious café, would be better.

3. Are there any differences between your favorite meeting places in the present and in your childhood?


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They are totally different.


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When I was a child, I hung out with the kids in our neighborhood, and our houses were the go-to place.


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When I was a child, I hung out with the kids in our neighborhood, and our houses were the go-to place.

I would normally not put a comma before the word and.

So the houses with the largest living room and the most toys would be the most favorite for us.


So the houses with the largest living rooms and the most toys would be the mobest favoriteplaces for us.

So the houses with the largest living room and the most number of toys would be the mostour favourite for us.

Because we all can earn money now, we have a wider choice of meeting places.


Because we all can earn money now, we have a wider choice of meeting places.

Because we all cancan all earn money now, we have a wider choice of meeting places.

And our go-to place now is a food venue that serves the kind of food that we all crave at that moment.


And oOur go-to place now is a food venue that serves the kind of food that we all crave at that given moment.

It is rare to start a sentence with "and" in English.

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4. Why are some meeting places better than others?


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I guess the vibe, atmosphere, food, beverages, and services of a place are all important aspects when deciding which meeting places are better.


I guess the vibe, atmosphere, food, beverages, and services of a placwithin any given venue are all important aspects when deciding which meeting places are better.

I guess the vibe, atmosphere, food, beverages, and services of a place are all important aspects when deciding which meeting places are better.

So a restaurant with good food and services, and a relaxing atmosphere would certainly be preferred over one with rude waiters, bad food and a stifling ambiance.


So a restaurant with good food and services, and a relaxing atmosphere, would certainly be preferred over one with rude waiters, bad food and a stifling ambianctmosphere.

Ambiance sounds more formal than "atmosphere"

So a restaurant with good food and, services, and a relaxing atmosphere would certainly be preferred over one with rude waiters, bad food and a stifling ambiance.

So a restaurant with good food and services, and a relaxing atmosphere would certainly be preferred tover one with rude waiters, bad food and a stifling ambiance.

Preferred to / chosen over

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