Nov. 5, 2022
Please review my essay.
Do you like the morning or evening?
I’m definitely a night owl. I’m currently living with my parents, and they wake up early and make a lot of noise in the morning, but they also sleep early too, so in the evening my house is really quiet. Since I like silence and peace, I prefer the evening over the morning.
What do you usually do in the evening?
I'm not really like going out, so after work, I stay at home and find something interesting to do on my phone, that is watching youtube videos, scrolling through my Facebook wall or reading web novels. I think I am quite addicted to my phone. Then at about 1 am, I do my night skincare routine and go to bed.
What did you do in the evening when you were little? Why?
Before I turned twelve, my parents could not afford to buy electronic media equipment like television, computers and smartphones, and also did most of the parents of the neighbor kids. I live in a dead-end alley with quite a spacious street and almost no vehicles passing by, so after dinner, I and the kids around my age gathered up in the street and played some traditional folk games such as jumping rope, “cat chases mouse” and “blind man’s buff”. However, after having a television, I start to spend more time watching cartoons and movies rather than playing outside.
Are there any differences between what you do in the evening now and what you did in the past?
Since I’ve got a smartphone at the age of 19, my nighttime routine has been quite the same; I have been spending most of my evening on my phone watching YouTube videos, scrolling through social media and reading web novels if I do not have any other task to do. But for the past 12 months, the amount of time spent on my phone has reduced significantly as I have been preparing for taking the IELTS test. I have dedicated most of my evening to improving my writing skill by writing two essays for parts 1 and 2 of the IELTS wring test and posting them on two forums that correct essays for free called Englishforums and lang correct.
Do you like the mornings or evenings?
Works better (more smooth) but your way still works
Since I like silence and peace, I prefer the evenings over the mornings.
Please review my essay.
Do you like the mornings or evenings?
I’m definitely a night owl.
I’m currently living with my parents, and they wake up early and make a lot of noise in the morning, but they also go to sleep early too, so in the evening my house is really quiet.
Since I like silenpeace and peacequiet, I prefer the evenings over the mornings.
"Peace and quiet" is a common saying.
What do you usually do in the evening?
I'm no don't really like going out, so after work, I stay at home and find something interesting to do on my phone, whether that is watching yYoutTube videos, scrolling through my Facebook wall, or reading web novels.
I think I am quite addicted to my phone.
Then at about 1 am, I do my night skincare routine and go to bed.
What did you do in the evening when you were little?
Why?
Before I turned twelve, my parents could not afford to buy electronic media equipment like televisions, computers and smartphones, and alsoneither did most of the parents of the kids in my neighbor kidsurhood.
I live in a dead-end alley with quite a spacious street and almost no vehicles passing by, so after dinner, Ime and the kids around my age gathered up in the street and played some traditional folk games, such as jumping rope, “cat chases mouse” and “blind man’s buff”.
However, after havingonce we got a television, I started to spend more time watching cartoons and movies, rather than playing outside.
Are there any differences between what you do in the evening now and what you did in the past?
Since I’ve gothad a smartphone atfrom the age of 19, my night-time routine has been quite the same; I have been spending most of my evening on my phone watching YouTube videos, scrolling through social media and reading web novels if I do not have any other taskthing else to do.
But for the past 12 months, the amount of time spent on my phone has reduced significantly as I have been preparing forto takinge the IELTS testexam.
I have dedicated most of my evenings to improving my writing skills by writing two essays for parts 1 and 2 of the IELTS writing test, and posting them on two forums that correct essays for free, called Englishforums and lLang cCorrect.
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Nov. 5, 2022
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I’m currently living with my parents, and they wake up early and make a lot of noise in the morning, but they also sleep early too, so in the evening my house is really quiet. I’m currently living with my parents, and they wake up early and make a lot of noise in the morning, but they also go to sleep early too, so in the evening my house is really quiet. |
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Since I like silence and peace, I prefer the evening over the morning. Since I like "Peace and quiet" is a common saying. Since I like silence and peace, I prefer |
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I'm not really like going out, so after work, I stay at home and find something interesting to do on my phone, that is watching youtube videos, scrolling through my Facebook wall or reading web novels. I |
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I think I am quite addicted to my phone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then at about 1 am, I do my night skincare routine and go to bed. Then at about 1 |
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What did you do in the evening when you were little? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before I turned twelve, my parents could not afford to buy electronic media equipment like television, computers and smartphones, and also did most of the parents of the neighbor kids. Before I turned twelve, my parents could not afford to buy electronic media equipment like televisions, computers and smartphones, and |
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I live in a dead-end alley with quite a spacious street and almost no vehicles passing by, so after dinner, I and the kids around my age gathered up in the street and played some traditional folk games such as jumping rope, “cat chases mouse” and “blind man’s buff”. I live in a dead-end alley with quite a spacious street and almost no vehicles passing by, so after dinner, |
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However, after having a television, I start to spend more time watching cartoons and movies rather than playing outside. However, |
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Are there any differences between what you do in the evening now and what you did in the past? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since I’ve got a smartphone at the age of 19, my nighttime routine has been quite the same; I have been spending most of my evening on my phone watching YouTube videos, scrolling through social media and reading web novels if I do not have any other task to do. Since I’ve |
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But for the past 12 months, the amount of time spent on my phone has reduced significantly as I have been preparing for taking the IELTS test. But for the past 12 months, the amount of time spent on my phone has reduced significantly as I have been preparing |
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I have dedicated most of my evening to improving my writing skill by writing two essays for parts 1 and 2 of the IELTS wring test and posting them on two forums that correct essays for free called Englishforums and lang correct. I have dedicated most of my evenings to improving my writing skills by writing two essays for parts 1 and 2 of the IELTS writing test, and posting them on two forums that correct essays for free, called Englishforums and |
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