Nov. 3, 2022
please review my essay
1. What kinds of things are boring to you?
There are a variety of things that bore me, like waiting in line and listening to long dull speeches. Repetitive daily tasks such as household work are also really boring.
2. What will you do when you feel bored?
As long as I can connect to the internet, I do not think that I can feel bored. There are various means of entertainment online; I can spend hours watching YouTube videos and reading web novels. There are endless digital entertainment contents that can drive away boredom.
3. What was the most boring thing you did when you were young?
The most boring that I did when I was young was that I used to babysit my brother, who is 6 years younger than me, when my parents were at work. I had to do this each day for about a year before I turned 7 and had to go to school. After that, I only looked after him on the weekend. Because he was so small and fragile, I was constantly scared that something could harm him. So I kept staring at him and did nothing else. However, I was a child at that time too, and you know how a child is, always fidgeting and wanting to run around. So looking after my brother is the most insufferable task for the old six-year-old me.
4. Do you think school is boring?
To me, school was absolutely boring. It felt like torture sitting through each 1-hour class as what most of my teachers did was reading everything in the textbook, except for math and science ones when they had to explain the formula. I think I still might have gotten decent scores on exams if I had skipped those classes and only tried to memorize knowledge from the textbook at home. But I believe that school time has prepared me to be resilient to the current boredom of having a 9-to-5 job.
There areis an endless digitalarray of entertainment contents that canthat helps me drive away boredom.
Nov. 5, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
pPlease review my essay.
1. What kinds of things are boring to you?
You could also say "What kinds of things do you find boring?"
There are a variety of things that bore me, like waiting in line and listening to long, dull speeches.
Repetitive daily tasks such as household work are also really boring.
2. What willdo you do when you feel bored?
As long as I can connect to the internet, I do not think that I can feelwould get bored.
There are various means ofways to entertainment myself online; I can spend hours watching YouTube videos and reading web novels.
There areis an endless stream of digital entertainment contents that can drive away boredom.
The most boring that I did when I was young was thatwhen I used to babysit my brother, who iwas 6 years younger than me, when my parents were at work.
I had to do this each day for about a year before I turned 7 and had to go to school.
After that, I only looked after him on the weekends.
Because he was so small and fragile, I was constantly scarworried that something cwould harm him.
So I kept staring atwould keep my eyes locked on him and didwould do nothing else.
However, I was a child at that time too, and you know how a child is, always fidgeting and wanting to run around.
So looking after my brother iwas the most insufferable task for the old six-year-old me.
4. Do you think school is boring?
To me, school was absolutely boring.
It felt like torture sitting through each 1-hour class as what most of my teachers did was readingwould just read aloud everything in the textbook, except for math and science ones, whenre they had to explain the formulas.
I think I still might have gotten decent scores on exams if I had skipped those classes and only tried to memorize knowledge from the textbook at home.
But I believe that school time has prepared me to be resilient againsto the current boredom of having a 9-to-5 job.
Nov. 5, 2022
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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please review my essay
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1. What kinds of things are boring to you? 1. What kinds of things are boring to you? You could also say "What kinds of things do you find boring?" |
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There are a variety of things that bore me, like waiting in line and listening to long dull speeches. There are a variety of things that bore me, like waiting in line and listening to long, dull speeches. |
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Repetitive daily tasks such as household work are also really boring. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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2. What will you do when you feel bored? 2. What |
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As long as I can connect to the internet, I do not think that I can feel bored. As long as I can connect to the internet, I do not think that I |
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There are various means of entertainment online; I can spend hours watching YouTube videos and reading web novels. There are various |
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There are endless digital entertainment contents that can drive away boredom. There There |
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3. What was the most boring thing you did when you were young? |
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The most boring that I did when I was young was that I used to babysit my brother, who is 6 years younger than me, when my parents were at work. The most boring |
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I had to do this each day for about a year before I turned 7 and had to go to school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that, I only looked after him on the weekend. After that, I only looked after him on the weekends. |
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Because he was so small and fragile, I was constantly scared that something could harm him. Because he was so small and fragile, I was constantly |
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So I kept staring at him and did nothing else. So I |
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However, I was a child at that time too, and you know how a child is, always fidgeting and wanting to run around. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So looking after my brother is the most insufferable task for the old six-year-old me. So looking after my brother |
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4. Do you think school is boring? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To me, school was absolutely boring. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It felt like torture sitting through each 1-hour class as what most of my teachers did was reading everything in the textbook, except for math and science ones when they had to explain the formula. It felt like torture sitting through each 1-hour class as |
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I think I still might have gotten decent scores on exams if I had skipped those classes and only tried to memorize knowledge from the textbook at home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I believe that school time has prepared me to be resilient to the current boredom of having a 9-to-5 job. But I believe that school time has prepared me to be resilient against |
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