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March 26, 2023

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"I am going to describe a time when I needed to search for consumer feedback on social media platforms. It was two months ago when my boss asked me to complete a report about our new product to prepare for its next plan, including its business performance and consumer feedback. For the business performance, I analyzed the company's data. But for consumer feedback, I had to investigate our consumers. Due to the time limit, I searched for consumer feedback on different social media platforms, as our target consumers are mainly 20 to 30 years old who use these platforms frequently. Therefore, it was appropriate for me to search for consumer feedback online instead of finding consumers offline in a short amount of time."

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Please hlelp me correct this

"I am going to describe a time when I needed to search for consumer feedback on social media platforms.

It was two months ago when my boss asked me to complete a report about our new product to prepare for its next plan, including its business performance and consumer feedback, to prepare for the next steps.

For the business performance, I analyzed the company's data.

But for consumer feedback, I had to investigate our consumers.

Due to the time limit, I searched for consumer feedback on different social media platforms, as our target consumers are mainly 20 to 30 years old who use these platforms frequently.

Therefore, it was appropriate for me to search for consumer feedback online instead of finding consumers offline in a short amount of time."

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echoooo

March 27, 2023

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THANK YOU js. Really appreciate it❤️

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Please hlelp me correct this

I am going to describe a time when I needed to search for consumers' feedback on a new product launch.


It was two months ago when my boss asked me to finish a report about our new product includes its business performance and consumers' feedback.


As for the business performance, I could analyze it with company's data, but for consumers' feedback I have to investigate our consumers.


Due to the time limit, I searched for consumers' feedback on different social media platforms because our targeted consumers are mainly 20 to 30 year-old who use those social media platforms a lot.


That's it's totally fun for me to search for consumers' feedback online instead of finding consumers offline in a short time.


Thus it's totally fine for me to search for consumers' feedback online instead of finding consumers offline in a short time.


"I am going to describe a time when I needed to search for consumer feedback on social media platforms.


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It was two months ago when my boss asked me to complete a report about our new product to prepare for its next plan, including its business performance and consumer feedback.


It was two months ago when my boss asked me to complete a report about our new product to prepare for its next plan, including its business performance and consumer feedback, to prepare for the next steps.

For the business performance, I analyzed the company's data.


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But for consumer feedback, I had to investigate our consumers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Due to the time limit, I searched for consumer feedback on different social media platforms, as our target consumers are mainly 20 to 30 years old who use these platforms frequently.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, it was appropriate for me to search for consumer feedback online instead of finding consumers offline in a short amount of time."


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