Please gGive mMe commentFeedback/Please Comment on my English Writing

Hello, Tthis is Thomas.

My birthday is 26thon October 26th 1995.

I'm going by the American way of writing dates, so if anyone from other English speaking countries, feel free to do so. Americans usually write the date like this: month, day, and year.

And I'm from Japan.

I want to increase my poormprove my (medicore) English writing skills.

I gave you an option to describe your English with more advanced words like Medicare, which means bad. You can also say that you have a basic command of English or a rudimentary (synonym of basic) level of English.

gGive me comments, please.

I'm assuming you're asking this politely, so I put the please to make it not overly direct and blunt.

Please give me a comment

Hello, Tthis is Thomas.

I want to increase my poor English skills.

gGive me a comment.

Hello, This is Thomas.

Correct, but would be more natural to say "I am Thomas" here.

And I'm from Japan.

Starting a sentence with "And" is very casual/informal. Maybe that's what you're going for here though.

I want to increasmprove my poor English skill.

"improve" is more natural than "increase" when talking about skills, but increase is valid here.

giPlease leave me a comment.

You want to say "a comment" or "comments" when asking for something specific and countable. "Give me comments" is grammatically valid, but has two problems making it unnatural:

1. "Give me X" as an entire sentence is direct to the point of rudeness (like コメントをわたせ), so you can add "Please" at the start which makes it more like コメントを下さい。
2. While give is valid for any noun, for comments, it's more natural to talk about "leaving comments" than "Giving comments"

My birthday is 26th October 1995.

Another user corrected you, but actually this is good! This is how you write the date in the UK. In the US, it would be "October 26th, 1995."

I want to increase my poor English skills.

gi(Please) leave me a comment.

Hello, Tthis is Thomas.

My birthday is 26th October 26th,1995.

AMy birthday is October 26th, 1995, and I' am from Japan.

This statement is correct, but you could rewrite the sentence to be included in the previous one.

I want to increasmprove my poor English skills.

Increase is used to refer to numbers and amounts. For example: "An increase in pay." The word "improve" is used to mean to make something better.

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