Oct. 11, 2023
Please Correct My Writing
I tried to find various ways to convey the same idea. Would you mind correcting all of them, please? Thank you very much.
The table compares five types of vehicles in Australia in terms of the number registered in 2010, 2012, and 2014, as well as the percentage change for each type over those years.
The table lists provides information on/compares the numbers of registrations in Australia for each of five different categories of vehicles. Data is given for three years, 2010, 2012, and 2014 as well as the overall percentage change.
The table shows the numbers of five different types of vehicles registered in Australia in three years: 2010, 2012, and 2014.
The table displays how many vehicles were registered for five different types of vehicles in Australia in three years: 2010, 2012, and 2014. ( I tried to use how many but it sounds rather unnatural)
Overall, the passenger vehicle registrations far exceeded all the others combined in all those years.
Overall, the greatest number of registrations were for passenger vehicles in all those years, and the lowest were for light trucks.
Overall, the number of passenger vehicles was the highest in all those years, and the number of light trucks was the lowest.
All types of registrations increased over time, with motorcycles having the highest percentage increase.
The numbers of all types increased with time, with motorcycles having the highest percentage increase.
There was an increasing trend in how many vehicles were registered for all five types.
Passenger and commercial vehicles experienced a modest increase of approximately 18%.
The number of female students represents 50% of the total student population in the school. (this sentence is not related to the graph)
In 2010, 11 million registered passenger vehicles, while the number/figure for commercial oné was significantly/substantially lower, at 2.3 million.
In addition, motorcycles recorded the largest percentage increase of 30.7%, or 175,000, between 2010 and 2014, in comparison with roughly 28% (50,000) for heavy trucks.
Australians registered 100 thousand light trucks in 2010 and that rose to 130 thousand in 2014.
Finally, the number of light trucks started at just over 100 thousand and eventually rose to about 130 thousand over those four years, a modest increase of around 10%.
Please Correct My Writing
I tried to find various ways to convey the same idea.
Would you mind correcting all of them, please?
Thank you very much.
The table compares five types of vehicles in Australia in terms of the number registered in 2010, 2012, and 2014, as well as the percentage change for each type over those years.
The table lists provides information on/compares the numbers of registrations in Australia for each of five different categories of vehicles.
Data is given for three years, 2010, 2012, and 2014 as well as the overall percentage change.
The table shows the numbers of five different types of vehicles registered in Australia within three years: 2010, 2012, and 2014.
In is okay, but within is easier to read and flows better in the particular sentence.
The table displays how many vehicles were registered for five different types of vehicles in Australia in three years: 2010, 2012, and 2014.
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Overall, the passenger vehicle registrations far exceeded all the others combined in all those years.
It's not unnatural! Any of these sentences are fine :)
Overall, the greatest number of registrations were for passenger vehicles in all those years, and the lowest were for light trucks.
all those years is not needed in this sentence
Overall, the number of passenger vehicles was the highest in all those years, and the number of, and light trucks was the lowest.
All types of registrations increased over time, with motorcycles having the highest percentage increase.
This is perfect. And the best one in my opinion.
The numbers of all types increased withover time, with motorcycles having the highest percentage increase.
The number of female students represents 50% of the total student population in the school.
Or "total school population"
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In 2010, 11 million registered passenger vehicles, while the number/figure for commercial onées was significantly/substantially lower, at 2.3 million.
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Very well written! It sounds just like an academic article I might have read in university.
Oct. 13, 2023
Thank you so so much. I really appreciate your detailed review.
The table lists provides information on/compares the numbers of vehicle registrations in Australia for each of five different categories of vehicles.
provides information on OR compares the number of (both are ok)
( I tried to use how many but it sounds rather unnatural)
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Overall, the passenger vehicle registrations far exceeded the registration numbers of all the other types combined in all those yearsacross all years surveyed.
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In 2010, there were 11 million registered passenger vehicles, while the number/figure for commercial onées was significantly/substantially lower, at 2.3 million.
Oct. 13, 2023
Thank you so so much. I really appreciate your detailed review.
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I tried to find various ways to convey the same idea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Would you mind correcting all of them, please? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thank you very much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The table compares five types of vehicles in Australia in terms of the number registered in 2010, 2012, and 2014, as well as the percentage change for each type over those years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The table lists provides information on/compares the numbers of registrations in Australia for each of five different categories of vehicles. The table provides information on OR compares the number of (both are ok) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Data is given for three years, 2010, 2012, and 2014 as well as the overall percentage change. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The table shows the numbers of five different types of vehicles registered in Australia in three years: 2010, 2012, and 2014. The table shows the numbers of five different types of vehicles registered in Australia within three years: 2010, 2012, and 2014. In is okay, but within is easier to read and flows better in the particular sentence. |
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The table displays how many vehicles were registered for five different types of vehicles in Australia in three years: 2010, 2012, and 2014. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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( I tried to use how many but it sounds rather unnatural) Overall, the passenger vehicle registrations far exceeded all the others combined in all those years. ( I tried to use how many but it sounds rather unnatural) ( I tried to use how many but it sounds rather unnatural It's not unnatural! Any of these sentences are fine :) |
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Overall, the greatest number of registrations were for passenger vehicles in all those years, and the lowest were for light trucks. Overall, the greatest number of registrations were for passenger vehicles all those years is not needed in this sentence |
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Overall, the number of passenger vehicles was the highest in all those years, and the number of light trucks was the lowest. Overall, the number of passenger vehicles was the highest |
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All types of registrations increased over time, with motorcycles having the highest percentage increase. All types of registrations increased over time, with motorcycles having the highest percentage increase. This is perfect. And the best one in my opinion. |
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The numbers of all types increased with time, with motorcycles having the highest percentage increase. The numbers of all types increased |
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There was an increasing trend in how many vehicles were registered for all five types. |
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Passenger and commercial vehicles experienced a modest increase of approximately 18%. |
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The number of female students represents 50% of the total student population in the school. The number of female students represents 50% of the total student population in the school. Or "total school population" |
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(this sentence is not related to the graph) In 2010, 11 million registered passenger vehicles, while the number/figure for commercial oné was significantly/substantially lower, at 2.3 million. (this sentence is not related to the graph) ( |
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In addition, motorcycles recorded the largest percentage increase of 30.7%, or 175,000, between 2010 and 2014, in comparison with roughly 28% (50,000) for heavy trucks. |
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Australians registered 100 thousand light trucks in 2010 and that rose to 130 thousand in 2014. |
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Finally, the number of light trucks started at just over 100 thousand and eventually rose to about 130 thousand over those four years, a modest increase of around 10%. |
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