Aug. 21, 2022
Playing TV Game
Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought new TV game software named 3D mario world.
I play it's TV game with my daughter. The first game of this game series was released by 1983. When I was childhood, I played this game series with my friends. So, I enjoyed the game with sweet sense of deja vu.
Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought a new TVvideo game software named 3D mario world.
I play it's TVthe video game with my daughter.
When I was a childhood, I played this game series with my friends.
So, I enjoyed the game with sweet sense of deja vu.nostalgia
Aug. 22, 2022
Thank you for your comment.
Thank you for sharing your paraphrase of "deja vu"!
Aug. 23, 2022
Thank you for your comment. Thank you for sharing your paraphrase of "deja vu"!
No worries! I just thought it sounded better contextually :)
Playing a TV Game
Because I was ill and had to stay at home due to illness, I bought a new TVvideo game software namcalled _3D mMario wWorld_.
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Because I was sick and had to stay home, I bought a new video game called _3D Mario World_.
I play it's TV game with my daughter.
The first game of this game series was released byin 1983.
When I was a childhood, I played ithis game series with my friends.
So, I enjoyed the latest game with a sweet sense of deja vu.
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かわいい！いい話です。上手に書けています！
Aug. 22, 2022
Thank you for your comment. I'm learning how to use pronoun "it".
Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought a new TVvideo game software namcalled 3D mMario wWorld.
If you say "named" people would still understand what you mean, but "called" would more commonly be used in this context. In English, proper nouns are always capitalized and the title of a video game would be considered a proper noun.
I play it's TVthe video game with my daughter.
The first game of this game series was released byin 1983.
When I was a childhood, I played this game series with my friends.
You can either say "when I was a child" or "During my childhood"
So, I enjoyed the game with a sweet sense of deja vu.
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Good job! Now I want to play 3D Mario World :)
Aug. 22, 2022
I and my daughte have been tackling on the final stage which is very hard.
Playing TV Ga Video game
Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought new TV game softwarvideo game named 3D mario world.
I play it's TVed the video game with my daughter.
The first game of this game series was released byin 1983.
Saying series instead of game series sounds more natural.
When I wasDuring my childhood, I played this game series with my friends.
So, I enjoyed the game with a sweet sense of dejaéjà vu.
This one turned into a French correction haha.
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Good job with the storytelling. I enjoyed reading it. Hope you enjoy the game some more.
Aug. 22, 2022
Now, we face on the major shift of game from 2D to 3D. I haven't been used to the 3D game yet.
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When I was childhood, I played this game series with my friends.
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