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asahan2013

Nov. 10, 2025

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Playing the Piano

Do you play the piano?
I don't play the piano very well, because I only practice with my right hand.
I learned to play the piano when I was in elementary school.
It's difficult for me because I don't know how to read sheet music.
My parents hired a piano teacher, who was a man.
I only played one piece of piano music, "Edelweiss".
The music has a melody that I had to remember, and I practiced playing the piano tens of thousands of times.
I gave up playing the piano when I was in high school.
My neighbors loved the music, and they asked me why I stopped playing the piano.
I answered that I didn't have a gift in music.
After years and years, I still remember how to play the melody of Edelweiss.
I didn't know the benefits of learning how to play the piano.
The good effect was to memorize the melody by playing it over and over again.
I think it is extremely good for developing one's memory.


我钢琴弹得不太好,因为我只练右手。
我在小学的时候就学了弹钢琴。
这对我来说很困难,因为我不知道如何读五线谱。
音乐有我必须记住的旋律。
我父母雇了一位钢琴老师,是个男的。
因此,我只会弹一首钢琴曲《雪绒花》。
音乐有我必须记住的旋律,我练习了成千上万次。
我在高中的时候就放弃弹钢琴了。
我的邻居很喜欢这首音乐,他们问我为什么不再弹钢琴了。
我回答说我没有音乐天赋。
年复一年,我仍然记得如何演奏雪绒花的旋律,因为我无法忘记它。
我不知道学习弹钢琴的效果。
这样做的好处是一遍又一遍地记住旋律。
我认为它对记忆非常好。

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Corrections

Do you play the piano?

I don'can’t play the piano very well, because I only practice with my right hand.

the original entry of “I don’t play the piano very well” is not the best way to say this sentence. English readers/ speakers would be able to understand, but instead saying “I can’t play the piano very well” is the proper and best way to articulate this

My parents hired a pianman to teacher, who was a man. me piano.

Swapping the subject and word order allows this sentence to read a lot better.

I answered that I didn't have a gift infor music.

either “gifted in music” or “gift for music”

After years and yearsYears later, I still remember how to play the melody of Edelweiss.

you could say “After all these years” or just “years later”. Repetition in “ years and years “ is not necessary

The good effecbest wasy to memorize the melody was by playing it over and over again.

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overall very good! a few minor tweaks 😊

Playing the Piano


Do you play the piano?


Do you play the piano?

I don't play the piano very well, because I only practice with my right hand.


I don'can’t play the piano very well, because I only practice with my right hand.

the original entry of “I don’t play the piano very well” is not the best way to say this sentence. English readers/ speakers would be able to understand, but instead saying “I can’t play the piano very well” is the proper and best way to articulate this

I learned to play the piano when I was in elementary school.


It's difficult for me because I don't know how to read sheet music.


My parents hired a piano teacher, who was a man.


My parents hired a pianman to teacher, who was a man. me piano.

Swapping the subject and word order allows this sentence to read a lot better.

I only played one piece of piano music, "Edelweiss".


The music has a melody that I had to remember, and I practiced playing the piano tens of thousands of times.


I gave up playing the piano when I was in high school.


My neighbors loved the music, and they asked me why I stopped playing the piano.


I answered that I didn't have a gift in music.


I answered that I didn't have a gift infor music.

either “gifted in music” or “gift for music”

After years and years, I still remember how to play the melody of Edelweiss.


After years and yearsYears later, I still remember how to play the melody of Edelweiss.

you could say “After all these years” or just “years later”. Repetition in “ years and years “ is not necessary

I didn't know the benefits of learning how to play the piano.


The good effect was to memorize the melody by playing it over and over again.


The good effecbest wasy to memorize the melody was by playing it over and over again.

I think it is extremely good for developing one's memory.


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