Nov. 10, 2025
Do you play the piano?
I don't play the piano very well, because I only practice with my right hand.
I learned to play the piano when I was in elementary school.
It's difficult for me because I don't know how to read sheet music.
My parents hired a piano teacher, who was a man.
I only played one piece of piano music, "Edelweiss".
The music has a melody that I had to remember, and I practiced playing the piano tens of thousands of times.
I gave up playing the piano when I was in high school.
My neighbors loved the music, and they asked me why I stopped playing the piano.
I answered that I didn't have a gift in music.
After years and years, I still remember how to play the melody of Edelweiss.
I didn't know the benefits of learning how to play the piano.
The good effect was to memorize the melody by playing it over and over again.
I think it is extremely good for developing one's memory.
我钢琴弹得不太好,因为我只练右手。
我在小学的时候就学了弹钢琴。
这对我来说很困难,因为我不知道如何读五线谱。
音乐有我必须记住的旋律。
我父母雇了一位钢琴老师,是个男的。
因此,我只会弹一首钢琴曲《雪绒花》。
音乐有我必须记住的旋律,我练习了成千上万次。
我在高中的时候就放弃弹钢琴了。
我的邻居很喜欢这首音乐,他们问我为什么不再弹钢琴了。
我回答说我没有音乐天赋。
年复一年,我仍然记得如何演奏雪绒花的旋律,因为我无法忘记它。
我不知道学习弹钢琴的效果。
这样做的好处是一遍又一遍地记住旋律。
我认为它对记忆非常好。
Do you play the piano?
I don'can’t play the piano very well, because I only practice with my right hand.
the original entry of “I don’t play the piano very well” is not the best way to say this sentence. English readers/ speakers would be able to understand, but instead saying “I can’t play the piano very well” is the proper and best way to articulate this
My parents hired a pianman to teacher, who was a man. me piano.
Swapping the subject and word order allows this sentence to read a lot better.
I answered that I didn't have a gift infor music.
either “gifted in music” or “gift for music”
After years and yearsYears later, I still remember how to play the melody of Edelweiss.
you could say “After all these years” or just “years later”. Repetition in “ years and years “ is not necessary
The good effecbest wasy to memorize the melody was by playing it over and over again.
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overall very good! a few minor tweaks 😊
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Do you play the piano? Do you play the piano? |
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I don't play the piano very well, because I only practice with my right hand. I the original entry of “I don’t play the piano very well” is not the best way to say this sentence. English readers/ speakers would be able to understand, but instead saying “I can’t play the piano very well” is the proper and best way to articulate this |
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I learned to play the piano when I was in elementary school. |
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It's difficult for me because I don't know how to read sheet music. |
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My parents hired a piano teacher, who was a man. My parents hired a Swapping the subject and word order allows this sentence to read a lot better. |
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I only played one piece of piano music, "Edelweiss". |
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The music has a melody that I had to remember, and I practiced playing the piano tens of thousands of times. |
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I gave up playing the piano when I was in high school. |
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My neighbors loved the music, and they asked me why I stopped playing the piano. |
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I answered that I didn't have a gift in music. I answered that I didn't have a gift either “gifted in music” or “gift for music” |
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After years and years, I still remember how to play the melody of Edelweiss.
you could say “After all these years” or just “years later”. Repetition in “ years and years “ is not necessary |
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I didn't know the benefits of learning how to play the piano. |
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The good effect was to memorize the melody by playing it over and over again. The |
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I think it is extremely good for developing one's memory. |
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