Jan. 1, 2022
Playing on an Iced Pond
Near my house, there is a Chinese stylized house in a park.
The house is for TV shows, so it is possible to enter there if there is no schedule using by the broadcasting companies.
In the center of the house, there is a small pond that is my favorite place.
During cold winters, the pond is frozen and it becomes the best place for children to skate.
My kids and I frequently went there to enjoy skating this weekend.
They skated until they were totally exhausted.
I thought, they felt the greatest happiness this winter.
Next time, I am going to bring skating things to enjoy more.
Playing on an Iced Frozen Pond
Near my house, there is a Chinese stylized housetraditional Chinese house located in a park.
I think you meant a traditional Chinese house often seen in historical dramas.
The house is intended for TV shows, so it is possible to entervisit there if there is no schedule using by the broadcasting companiesit isn't occupied by the filming crew.
In the center of the house, there is a small pond that isI consider my favorite place.
During cold winters, the pond is frozen and it becomes the best place for children to skate.
My kids and I frequently went there to enjoy skating this weekend.
When you say "frequently," it indicates the frequency of a repeated activity. By stating a time frame, it discontinues that repeated action, so it should not be used in this sentence. Alternative sentence: My kids and I recently went there to enjoy skating this weekend. (This would use an adverb of time that pairs well with your stated time.)
They skated until they were totally exhausted.
I thought, theyink they must have felt the greatest happiness this winter.
Next time, I am going to bring skating things toequipment so they can enjoy it more.
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Jan. 1, 2022
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Playing on an Iced Pond Playing on a |
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Near my house, there is a Chinese stylized house in a park. Near my house, there is a I think you meant a traditional Chinese house often seen in historical dramas. |
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The house is for TV shows, so it is possible to enter there if there is no schedule using by the broadcasting companies. The house is intended for TV shows, so it is possible to |
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In the center of the house, there is a small pond that is my favorite place. In the center of the house, there is a small pond that |
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During cold winters, the pond is frozen and it becomes the best place for children to skate. During cold winters, the pond is frozen and |
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My kids and I frequently went there to enjoy skating this weekend. My kids and I frequently went there to enjoy skating When you say "frequently," it indicates the frequency of a repeated activity. By stating a time frame, it discontinues that repeated action, so it should not be used in this sentence. Alternative sentence: My kids and I recently went there to enjoy skating this weekend. (This would use an adverb of time that pairs well with your stated time.) |
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They skated until they were totally exhausted. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I thought, they felt the greatest happiness this winter. I th |
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Next time, I am going to bring skating things to enjoy more. Next time, I am going to bring skating |
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