Sept. 29, 2020
Playing Animal Crossing
I moved Grizzly's house behind a farm. The house exterior matchs scenery of the farm. And, I made new criffs and a waterfall in the southwest of my island. I often copied a rayout of an island that other person made since I'm not creative. The new update is coming tomorrow. I'm excited!
どうぶつの森
Grizzlyの家を畑の後ろに移動させました。家の外観が畑にぴったり合ってます。あと、島の南西に新しい崖と滝を作りました。他の人が作った島を真似ています。私は島づくりのセンスがないのでよく他の人の島を真似てしまいます。明日ハロウィンのアップデートがあります。楽しみです！
Playing Animal Crossing
I moved Grizzly's house behind a farm.
The house exterior matchses the scenery of the farm.
And, II also made new crliffs and a waterfall in the southwest part of my island.
I often copied a ry layouts of an islands that other personople madke since I'm not creative.
copied -> copy to match the tense of “I’m not creative”, I assuming that you still copy layouts
person -> people unless you always copy from a specific person
The new update is coming tomorrow.
I'm excited!
Feedback
Good writing! I hope you like the update!
|
I'm excited! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Playing Animal Crossing This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I moved Grizzly's house behind a farm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
The house exterior matchs scenery of the farm. The house exterior match |
|
And, I made new criffs and a waterfall in the northwest of my island. |
|
I copied a rayout of an island that other person made since I'm not creative. |
|
The new update is coming tomorrow. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I often copied a rayout of an island that other person made since I'm not creative. I often cop copied -> copy to match the tense of “I’m not creative”, I assuming that you still copy layouts person -> people unless you always copy from a specific person |
|
And, I made new criffs and a waterfall in the southwest of my island.
|
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium