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perth

July 31, 2023

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Plato is the best !

I am usually interested in people that always come with curiosity. How they be what they are? eagerness to learn is a qualification that hard to has and keep in my opinion. But Plato is curious all the time, and his thoughts and beliefs are also not forgotten to this day. People still use his knowledge for discussion. that's amazing for me. similar to the Thai quotation that tells us when animals die they also left their horn or leather for the other, but when people die the only thing that will be left is their reputation. So this makes me think about being useful and doing anything that I am skilled in.

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But Plato iwas curious all the time, and his thoughts and beliefs are also not forgotten to this day.

Since Plato isn't alive anymore, it's best to talk about him in the past tense.

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This was a fun read, I also really love the quote I've never heard that one before.

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perth

Aug. 1, 2023

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Thank you very much 😊 😆

Plato is the best !

I am usually interested in people thatwho always come withhave curiosity.

How will they become whato they are?

eEagerness to learn is a qualificationty that is hard to hasve and keep, in my opinion.

A qualification is usually an official document. A quality is just a trait of someone's personality.

But Plato is curious all the time, and his thoughts and beliefs are also not forgotten to this day.

People still use his knowledge for discussion.

tThat's amazing forto me.

It is similar to the Thai quotation that tells us when animals die they also leftave their horns or leather for the otherbehind, but when people die the only thing that will be left is their reputation.

"... horns or leather for others." also is grammatically correct here. I personally would use "leave ... behind" since its a very popular phrase.

So this makes me think about being useful and doing anything that I am skilled in.

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Nice text! I think curiosity is a very good trait as well. The phrase about the animals is also really neat.

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perth

July 31, 2023

5

Thank you so much 😇

Plato is the best !


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I am usually interested in people that always come with curiosity.


I am usually interested in people thatwho always come withhave curiosity.

How they be what they are?


How will they become whato they are?

eagerness to learn is a qualification that hard to has and keep in my opinion.


eEagerness to learn is a qualificationty that is hard to hasve and keep, in my opinion.

A qualification is usually an official document. A quality is just a trait of someone's personality.

But Plato is curious all the time, and his thoughts and beliefs are also not forgotten to this day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But Plato iwas curious all the time, and his thoughts and beliefs are also not forgotten to this day.

Since Plato isn't alive anymore, it's best to talk about him in the past tense.

People still use his knowledge for discussion.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

that's amazing for me.


tThat's amazing forto me.

similar to the Thai quotation that tells us when animals die they also left their horn or leather for the other, but when people die the only thing that will be left is their reputation.


It is similar to the Thai quotation that tells us when animals die they also leftave their horns or leather for the otherbehind, but when people die the only thing that will be left is their reputation.

"... horns or leather for others." also is grammatically correct here. I personally would use "leave ... behind" since its a very popular phrase.

So this makes me think about being useful and doing anything that I am skilled in.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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