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lysev98

Jan. 9, 2025

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Planning my day - working from home.

Good morning everyone!
One of my new year resolutions is to be more constant with my purposes, and one of them is to write everyday in this app, so here we go!
I'm going to introduce myself briefly: I've just moved to a new little city so far from my home, and now I'm looking for a job here in order to meet new people and develop my professional background. The main problem is that I'm a junior oncology researcher, and this city doesn't even have an hospital!
But thinking about it, one of the many reasons of my moving was the saturation at work - I usually worked 12 hours a day, and I had no time for myself or my loved ones - including my little puppy!
Now, I'm studying a Master's degree in Big data (because previously I have studied a Bioinformatics degree) in order to be able to work from home, but I need to improve my English (a lot!). I'm a little bit worried about money but who doesn't.

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Good morning everyone!

One of my nNew yYear r's Resolutions is to be more constaistent with my purposes, and one of them is to write everyday in this app, so here we go!

Instead of "purposes", "goals" would sound a bit more natural.

I'm going to introduce myself briefly: I've just moved to a new little city soquite far from my home, and now I'm looking for a job here in order to meet new people and develop my professional background.

The main problem is that I'm a junior oncology researcher, and this city doesn't even have an hospital!

But thinking about it, one of the many reasons of my moving was the saturation at work - I usually worked 12 hours a day, and I had no time for myself or my loved ones - including my little puppy!

Now, I'm studying a Master's degree in Big data (because previously I have studied a Bioinformatics degree) in order to be able to work from home, but I need to improve my English (a lot!).

I'm a little bit worried about money but who doesn't.

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Planning my day - working from home.

Good morning everyone!

One of my nNew yYear's resolutions is to be more constaistent with my purposegoals, and one of them is to write everyday ion this app, so here we go!

I'm going to introduce myself briefly: I've just moved to a new little city so far from my home, and now I'm looking for a job here in order to meet new people and develop my professional background.

No necesitas la palabra «aquí» porque está implícita en tu frase

The main problem is that I'm a junior oncology researcher, and this city doesn't even have an hospital!

But thinking about it, one of the many reasons of my moving was the saturationlong hours at work - I usually worked 12 hours a day, and I had no time for myself or my loved ones - including my little puppy!

Now, I'm studying a Master's degree in Big data (because previously I have studied a Bioinformatics degree) in order to be able to work from home, but I need to improve my English (a lot!).

I'm a little bit worried about money but who doeisn't.

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Muy bueno! Good luck

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lysev98

Jan. 9, 2025

7

Gracias :)
Voy a intentar preguntarte una duda en inglés (perdón de antemano).
"But thinking about it, one of the many reasons of my moving was the saturation- long hours at work"
Here, I wanted to say that I was overwhelmed of the job (due to the schedules, but also another factors, like exploitation by the boss, constant anxiety...). Which expression could I use instead "long hours" or "saturation"? Thank you so much and apologize for my mistakes!

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judar

Jan. 9, 2025

177

Good question! Podrías decir que "I was burnt out" o "I was stressed out" pero "Burnt out" es una frase muy común

lysev98's avatar
lysev98

Jan. 9, 2025

7

Muchísimas gracias :)

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judar

Jan. 9, 2025

177

De nada!

Planning my day - working from home.


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Good morning everyone!


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Now, I'm studying a Master's degree in Big data (because previously I have studied a Bioinformatics degree) in order to be able to work from home, but I need to imporve my English (a lot!).


One of my new year resolutions is to be more constant with my purposes, and one of them is to write everyday in this app, so here we go!


One of my nNew yYear's resolutions is to be more constaistent with my purposegoals, and one of them is to write everyday ion this app, so here we go!

One of my nNew yYear r's Resolutions is to be more constaistent with my purposes, and one of them is to write everyday in this app, so here we go!

Instead of "purposes", "goals" would sound a bit more natural.

I'm going to introduce myself briefly: I've just moved to a new little city so far from my home, and now I'm looking for a job here in order to meet new people and develop my professional background.


I'm going to introduce myself briefly: I've just moved to a new little city so far from my home, and now I'm looking for a job here in order to meet new people and develop my professional background.

No necesitas la palabra «aquí» porque está implícita en tu frase

I'm going to introduce myself briefly: I've just moved to a new little city soquite far from my home, and now I'm looking for a job here in order to meet new people and develop my professional background.

The main problem is that I'm a junior oncology researcher, and this city doesn't even have an hospital!


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But thinking about it, one of the many reasons of my moving was the saturation at work - I usually worked 12 hours a day, and I had no time for myself or my loved ones - including my little puppy!


But thinking about it, one of the many reasons of my moving was the saturationlong hours at work - I usually worked 12 hours a day, and I had no time for myself or my loved ones - including my little puppy!

But thinking about it, one of the many reasons of my moving was the saturation at work - I usually worked 12 hours a day, and I had no time for myself or my loved ones - including my little puppy!

Now, I'm studying a Master's degree in Big data (because previously I have studied a Bioinformatics degree) in order to be able to work from home, but I need to improve my English (a lot!).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm a little bit worried about money but who doesn't.


I'm a little bit worried about money but who doeisn't.

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