March 3, 2025
Plan to travel to Japan
I am very excited for my plan to travel to Japan this weekend.
I have bought air ticket and I booked hotel.
The restaurant I want to go to has already been full booked. But, never mind. I will go next time.
I want to take a walk along the seaside .
I want to soak in hot spring in Shirahama.
我对这周末去日本旅游的计划很兴奋。
我已经买好了机票并且订好了酒店。
我想去的那家餐馆已经被预订满了。但是没关系，我会下次再去。
我想要沿着海边散步。
我想要在白滨泡温泉。
Plan to travel toJapanese Travel Plans / Travel Plans for Japan
The original title is fine, the other options just sound a bit more natural
I have bought an air ticket and I booked hotel.
The restaurant I want to go to has already been fully booked.
I want to soak in (the/a) hot spring in Shirahama.
If there's a specific hot spring you have in mind, "the" is better here. If you don't know which hot spring you're going to "a" is better. You need one of them though.
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I've been learning Japanese, and writing in Japanese on this site. I should go to Japan at some point, but it's very far away.
March 4, 2025
I'm really grateful for your help! That's amazing that you're learning Japanese! Even though it's far, it's definitely worth the trip!
I have bought air ticket and I booked a hotel.
The restaurant I want to go to has already been fully booked.
But, never mind.,
I want to soak in the hot springs in Shirahama.
Or for a particular spot, a hot spring but probably the hot springs is the more common choice.
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You write well.
March 4, 2025
Thank you for your guidance! Have a nice day!
PMy plans to travel to Japan
I am very excited forabout my plans to travel to Japan this weekend.
I have bought airflight tickets and I booked the hotel.
TUnfortunately, the restaurant I wanted to go to has already been fully booked.
I added unfortunately because at first it wasn't clear to me if you had booked the restaurant, if if you couldn't because it was already full. Adding this word takes away any doubts the reader may have.
But, never mind.
I will go next time.
I want to take a walk along the seaside .
I want to soak in the hot spring in Shirahama.
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Sounds like a fun trip - enjoy!
March 4, 2025
I really appreciate your detailed feedback! Have a great day!
Plan to tTravelling to Japan
I am very excited for my plan to travelto go to Japan this weekend.
Your sentence was a bit redundant so I shortened it
I have bought airthe flight tickets and I booked the hotel.
The restaurant I wanted to go to has already been fully booked.
But, never mind it doesn't matter.
I will go next time.
I want to take a walk along the seaside .
I want to soak in the hot springs in Shirahama.
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你写的很好，加油! Hope you have a great time
March 4, 2025
Thank you for your help! 我刚刚看了你的主页，你的中文也写的很好！Have a good one!
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Plan to travel to Japan
The original title is fine, the other options just sound a bit more natural |
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I am very excited for my plan to travel to Japan this weekend. I am very excited Your sentence was a bit redundant so I shortened it I am very excited |
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I have bought air ticket and I booked hotel. I have bought I have bought I have bought air ticket and I booked a hotel. I have bought an air ticket and I booked hotel. |
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The restaurant I want to go to has already been full booked. The restaurant I wanted to go to has already been fully booked.
I added unfortunately because at first it wasn't clear to me if you had booked the restaurant, if if you couldn't because it was already full. Adding this word takes away any doubts the reader may have. The restaurant I want to go to has already been fully booked. The restaurant I want to go to has already been fully booked. |
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But, never mind. But This sentence has been marked as perfect! But, never mind |
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I will go next time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to take a walk along the seaside . This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to soak in hot spring in Shirahama. I want to soak in the hot springs in Shirahama. I want to soak in the hot spring in Shirahama. I want to soak in the hot springs in Shirahama. Or for a particular spot, a hot spring but probably the hot springs is the more common choice. I want to soak in (the/a) hot spring in Shirahama. If there's a specific hot spring you have in mind, "the" is better here. If you don't know which hot spring you're going to "a" is better. You need one of them though. |
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