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Mimi

June 9, 2020

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Place I want to visit

There is so many place I want to visit that I can’t tell write it all.
The first place I want to visit is Machu Picchu and Uyuni lake.
I’ve longed to go to these places for 15 years because I love visiting historical places which I used to see and learn with a world history text book. When I’ve been to Roma and watched colosseum, I was taking bless and very impressed as if I connected past.
Thanks to everything in the past, I felt emotionally that the world what is now include me can exist.

I’d love to feel this same emotion over and over, find something new and experience different culture, so my dream is traveling all over the world.
When I go to Machu Picchu, I would like to go to all over South America.
I can’t decide next destination...let me see... Greek, Turk, England, India, Mongol hmm, All of them are too attractive!!!!

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There isare so many places I want to visit that I can’t tell write it allpossibly write them all down.

An alternative way of saying this. You could also say, "There are so many places I want to visit that it would take me forever to tell you about them all". :-)

I’ve longed to go to these places for about 15 years now because I love visiting the historical places whichthat I used to see and learn with alearn about in my old world history text book.

An alternative way of saying this. :-)

Thanks to everything in the past, I felt emotionally that the world what is now include me can existI felt emotional because thanks to everything that has happened in the past, the world we currently live in and me as a person were made possible.

I was not too sure what you meant here. Could you rewrite it in Japanese for me?

I can’t decide on my next destination...l Let me see...: Greek, Turkey, England/UK, India, Mongol hia. Hmm, Aall of them are tosound so attractive!!!!

England only refers to one part of the UK. If you would like to visit the UK as a whole (England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland), then call it the UK. :-)

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I agree with you. :-D I want to visit so many places too, but I need 1) money and 2) more time off work. :'( I hope you will be able to visit these places soon! :-D

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Mimi

June 10, 2020

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Thanks to everything in the past, I felt emotionally that the world what is now include me can existI felt emotional because thanks to everything that has happened in the past, the world we currently live in and me as a person were made possible.

過去の出来事全てがあって、今の世界があり、かつ私も生きていると、心から感じる
と言いたかったです!

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June 10, 2020

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Yeah, definitely lol We need more time off work but we have to make money more. It’s frustrating! We can do it!

Places I want to visit

There isare so many places I want to visit that I can’t tell write ithem all.

The first places I want to visit isare Machu Picchu and Uyuni lake.

I’ve longed to go to these places for 15 years because I love visiting historical places which I used to see and learn with a worldthat I learned about in history text books.

When I’ve be went to Romae and watched csaw the Colosseum, I was taking bless and very impressed as if Ifelt very connected to the past.

I don't know what you mean by "taking bless" -- maybe "I felt blessed"?

Thanks to everything in the past, I felt emotionally that the world what is now include me can existthat today's world, including me, was made possible.

I’d love to feel this same emotion over and over, by finding something new and experienceing different cultures, so my dream is to traveling all over the world.

When I go to Machu Picchu, I would also like to go totravel all over South America.

I can’t decide on my next destination...let me see... Greekce, Turkey, England, India, Mongolia, hmm, All of them are too attractive!!!!

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Good job! I also like feeling connected with history.

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Mimi

June 10, 2020

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Thank you! I wanted to say “it took my breath away!” My spell was totally wrong! lol

Place I want to visit


Places I want to visit

There is so many place I want to visit that I can’t tell write it all.


There isare so many places I want to visit that I can’t tell write ithem all.

There isare so many places I want to visit that I can’t tell write it allpossibly write them all down.

An alternative way of saying this. You could also say, "There are so many places I want to visit that it would take me forever to tell you about them all". :-)

The first place I want to visit is Machu Picchu and Uyuni lake.


The first places I want to visit isare Machu Picchu and Uyuni lake.

I’ve longed to go to these places for 15 years because I love visiting historical places which I used to see and learn with a world history text book.


I’ve longed to go to these places for 15 years because I love visiting historical places which I used to see and learn with a worldthat I learned about in history text books.

I’ve longed to go to these places for about 15 years now because I love visiting the historical places whichthat I used to see and learn with alearn about in my old world history text book.

An alternative way of saying this. :-)

When I’ve been to Roma and watched colosseum, I was taking bless and very impressed as if I connected past.


When I’ve be went to Romae and watched csaw the Colosseum, I was taking bless and very impressed as if Ifelt very connected to the past.

I don't know what you mean by "taking bless" -- maybe "I felt blessed"?

Thanks to everything in the past, I felt emotionally that the world what is now include me can exist.


Thanks to everything in the past, I felt emotionally that the world what is now include me can existthat today's world, including me, was made possible.

Thanks to everything in the past, I felt emotionally that the world what is now include me can existI felt emotional because thanks to everything that has happened in the past, the world we currently live in and me as a person were made possible.

I was not too sure what you meant here. Could you rewrite it in Japanese for me?

I’d love to feel this same emotion over and over, find something new and experience different culture, so my dream is traveling all over the world.


I’d love to feel this same emotion over and over, by finding something new and experienceing different cultures, so my dream is to traveling all over the world.

When I go to Machu Picchu, I would like to go to all over South America.


When I go to Machu Picchu, I would also like to go totravel all over South America.

I can’t decide next destination...let me see... Greek, Turk, England, India, Mongol hmm, All of them are too attractive!!!!


I can’t decide on my next destination...let me see... Greekce, Turkey, England, India, Mongolia, hmm, All of them are too attractive!!!!

I can’t decide on my next destination...l Let me see...: Greek, Turkey, England/UK, India, Mongol hia. Hmm, Aall of them are tosound so attractive!!!!

England only refers to one part of the UK. If you would like to visit the UK as a whole (England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland), then call it the UK. :-)

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