Sept. 22, 2025
I graduated from Industrial engineering last in June. I haven't job but I am looking job. This process quite hardly. I feel stressful and not enough.I target improve is my job topics and English language. Who's know maybe I move to abroad. I hope to short time I start new my career life.
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I graduated fromwith a degree in Industrial engineering last in June.
I graduated with a degree in Industrial engineering last June.
I don't haven't a job yet but I am actively looking jobfor one.
I don't have a job yet but I am actively looking for one.
This e process is quite hardly/difficult.
The process is quite hard/difficult.
I feel stressfuled and as though I am not enough.I My target is to improve ison my job topics and my abilities in the English language.
I feel stressed and as though I am not enough. My target is to improve on my job topics and my abilities in the English language.
Clarifying what you mean by job topics would be good for the reader!
Who's knows, maybe I can move to abroad.
Who knows, maybe I can move abroad.
I hope to short time I start a new my career lifesoon.
I hope to start a new career soon.
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Good job! Nice text - all good luck with your language learning :)
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New Graduate
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I graduated from Iwith a degree in industrial engineering last /in June.
I graduated with a degree in industrial engineering last/in June.
We'd say we graduated from [name of school, e.g., Penn State], or we would say we graduated with a degree in [subject].
You could say either "in June" or "last June," but not both words.
I don't haven't a job yet, but I am looking jobfor one.
I don't have a job yet, but I am looking for one.
Replacing the second "a job" with "one" to avoid repetition
This e process is quite hardly.
The process is quite hard.
I feel stressfuled and not enough.I target improve is my job topicsunderqualified. I am working on improving the skills used for my career and my English language.
I feel stressed and underqualified. I am working on improving the skills used for my career and my English.
When we feel stress, we say we are stressed. When something else causes stress, we say that thing is stressful.
Feeling you are "not enough" for a job would be described as being underqualified.
Who's knows, maybe I will move to abroad.
Who knows, maybe I will move abroad.
Possibility in the future: Maybe I will...
I hope to short time Ioon start my new my career life.
I hope to soon start my new career life.
Something to occur in a short amount of time in the future = soon
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Great job. Good luck!
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I graduated from Industrial engineering last in June.
I graduated We'd say we graduated from [name of school, e.g., Penn State], or we would say we graduated with a degree in [subject]. You could say either "in June" or "last June," but not both words.
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I feel stressful and not enough.I target improve is my job topics and English language.
I feel stress When we feel stress, we say we are stressed. When something else causes stress, we say that thing is stressful. Feeling you are "not enough" for a job would be described as being underqualified.
I feel stress Clarifying what you mean by job topics would be good for the reader! |
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Who's know maybe I move to abroad.
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I hope to short time I start new my career life.
I hope to s Something to occur in a short amount of time in the future = soon
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