School adventures Part 1

First, Harry and Professor Snape found an enormous and strange room, hidden far beneath the school. There are old scrolls, a mysterious mirror, stone statues and unusual magical items. In the middle of the room sat a small table with a glowing magical puzzle, after several tense minutes to solve the puzzle a hidden door slowly creaked open. They walked and finally came to a dead end; Potter cast a spell and the wall vanish completely. Behind it was a spiral staircase, they climbed up and emerged into a circulare room filled with incredibly rare magical items. To their surprise, they had ended up in Dumbledore's office. It was the headmaster´s private storage room.
Second, Ron and Draco, worked on a project about a prediction of the future. After arguing for several minutes, they made a deal: they would try both; reading tea leaves and astrology. And see which one give them a better prediction. As the project went on, something strange happened; for once Ron and Malfoy weren´t flighting. They were still rivals, of course but for a brief moment, they were partners in mischief.
By the end of the week, they had a collected a whole list of ridiculous predictions: danger from falling broomsticks, unexpectable baldness, a great disappointment in love, being bitten by a venomous creature, failing exams and marrying someone unusual. And with that, they went their separate ways, already back to being enemies.

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School aAdventures Part 1

In the middle of the room sat a small table with a glowing magical puzzle, a. After several tense minutes to solve the puzzle, a hidden door slowly creaked open.

They walked and finally came to a dead end;

Potter cast a spell, and the wall vanish completely vanished.

Behind ithe wall was a spiral staircase, t. They climbed up and emerged into a circulare room filled with incredibly rare magical items.

To their surprise, they had ended up in Dumbledore's office.

It was the headmaster´s private storage room.

Second, Ron and Draco, worked on a project about a prediction ofng the future.

After arguing for several minutes, they made a deal: they would try both;, reading tea leaves and astrology.

And see which one gives them a better prediction.

As the project went on, something strange happened; for once, Ron and Malfoy weren´'t flighting.

They were still rivals, of course, but for a brief moment, they were partners in mischief.

By the end of the week, they had a collected a whole list of ridiculous predictions: danger from falling broomsticks, unexpectable baldness, a great disappointment in love, being bitten by a venomous creature, failing exams and marrying someone unusual.

And with that, they went their separate ways, already back to being enemies.

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School adventures Part 1


School aAdventures Part 1

First, Harry and Professor Snape found an enormous and strange room, hidden far beneath the school.


There are old scrolls, a mysterious mirror, stone statues and unusual magical items.


In the middle of the room sat a small table with a glowing magical puzzle, after several tense minutes to solve the puzzle a hidden door slowly creaked open.


In the middle of the room sat a small table with a glowing magical puzzle, a. After several tense minutes to solve the puzzle, a hidden door slowly creaked open.

They walked and finally came to a dead end;


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Potter cast a spell and the wall vanish completely.


Potter cast a spell, and the wall vanish completely vanished.

Behind it was a spiral staircase, they climbed up and emerged into a circulare room filled with incredibly rare magical items.


Behind ithe wall was a spiral staircase, t. They climbed up and emerged into a circulare room filled with incredibly rare magical items.

To their surprise, they had ended up in Dumbledore's office.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was the headmaster´s private storage room.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Second, Ron and Draco, worked on a project about a prediction of the future.


Second, Ron and Draco, worked on a project about a prediction ofng the future.

After arguing for several minutes, they made a deal: they would try both; reading tea leaves and astrology.


After arguing for several minutes, they made a deal: they would try both;, reading tea leaves and astrology.

And see which one give them a better prediction.


And see which one gives them a better prediction.

As the project went on, something strange happened; for once Ron and Malfoy weren´t flighting.


As the project went on, something strange happened; for once, Ron and Malfoy weren´'t flighting.

They were still rivals, of course but for a brief moment, they were partners in mischief.


They were still rivals, of course, but for a brief moment, they were partners in mischief.

By the end of the week, they had a collected a whole list of ridiculous predictions: danger from falling broomsticks, unexpectable baldness, a great disappointment in love, being bitten by a venomous creature, failing exams and marrying someone unusual.


By the end of the week, they had a collected a whole list of ridiculous predictions: danger from falling broomsticks, unexpectable baldness, a great disappointment in love, being bitten by a venomous creature, failing exams and marrying someone unusual.

And with that, they went their separate ways, already back to being enemies.


And with that, they went their separate ways, already back to being enemies.

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