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Reasons to the Dragon Boat festival

I am not sure how many people will write the story of the Dragon Boat festival these days, since from today to the next two days, people in China will have a national holiday for it.

During these days, people would eat sticky rice dumplings and have boat racing to celebrate it. About 2500 years ago, a poet and stateman in ancient China, named Qu Yuan. He worked for Chu Kindom when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he himself jumped into a river to show his disgruntle and patriotism. Therefore, local people threw sticky rice dumpling into the river to prevent fish from devouring his body, and arose the noise of boat racing to keep the evil spirit away aiming to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit.

Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone, why we people in China only celebrate this stateman or poet? As to my understanding and give a personal opinion on this; Qu Yuan would like to suicide when his country was conquered, this is what our government wants to imply to us. They'd like to see this idea be inherited from generation to generation.

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As to my understanding and to give a personal opinion on this;, Qu Yuan would like toanted to commit suicide when his country was conquered, and this is what our government wants to imply to us.

怖い。みんなが自殺をするなら、誰も国を守れませんね。

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June 25, 2023

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I do not encourage suicide for any purpose.

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During these days, people would eat sticky rice dumplings and have boat racing to celebrate it.

They'd like to see this idea be inherited from generation to generation.

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Reasons to the Dragon Boat festival


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英語の助詞がとても大変ですね。

I am not sure how many people will write the story of the Dragon Boat festival these days, since from today to the next two days, people in China will have a national holiday for it.


I am not sure how many people will writeremember the story of the Dragon Boat festival these days, since from today to. For the next two days, people in China will have a national holiday for it. I am not sure how many people will remember the story of the Dragon Boat festival these days. For the next two days, people in China will have a national holiday for it.

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During these days, people would eat sticky rice dumplings and have boat racing to celebrate it.


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During these days, people wouldis period people will celebrate it by eating sticky rice dumplings and have boat racing to celebrate itcompetitions. During this period people will celebrate it by eating sticky rice dumplings and have boat racing competitions.

During these daysis time, people wouldill eat sticky rice dumplings and havrace boat racings to celebrate it. During this time, people will eat sticky rice dumplings and race boats to celebrate it.

美味しそう!

About 2500 years ago, a poet and stateman in ancient China, named Qu Yuan.


About 2500 years ago, there was a poet and stateman in ancient China, named Qu Yuan. About 2500 years ago, there was a poet and stateman in ancient China named Qu Yuan.

About 2500 years ago, there was a poet and statesman in ancient China, named Qu Yuan. About 2500 years ago, there was a poet and statesman in ancient China, named Qu Yuan.

About 2500 years ago, there was a poet and statesman in ancient China, named Qu Yuan. About 2500 years ago, there was a poet and statesman in ancient China named Qu Yuan.

He worked for Chu Kindom when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he himself jumped into a river to show his disgruntle and patriotism.


He worked for the Chu Kingdom when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he himself jumped into a river to show his disgruntle and patriotism. He worked for the Chu Kingdom when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he jumped into a river to show his disgruntle and patriotism.

He worked for the Chu Kingdom and when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he himself jumped into a river to show his disgruntle andfrustration and also his patriotism. He worked for the Chu Kingdom and when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he jumped into a river to show his frustration and also his patriotism.

He worked for the Chu Kingdom and, when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he himself jumped into a river to show his disgruntlement and patriotism. He worked for the Chu Kingdom and, when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he jumped into a river to show his disgruntlement and patriotism.

複雑な分ですね。よく出来ました!

Therefore, local people threw sticky rice dumpling into the river to prevent fish from devouring his body, and arose the noise of boat racing to keep the evil spirit away aiming to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit.


Therefore, local people threw sticky rice dumplings into the river to prevent fish from devouring his body, and aroused the noise of boat racing to keep the evil spirit away, aiming to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit. Therefore, local people threw sticky rice dumplings into the river to prevent fish from devouring his body, and used the noise of boat racing to keep the evil spirit away, aiming to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit.

Therefore, local people threw sticky rice dumplings into the river to prevent fish from devouring his body, and aroincreased the noise of the boat racing to keep the evil spirit away aiming. Their objective was to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit. The local people threw sticky rice dumplings into the river to prevent fish from devouring his body and increased the noise of the boat racing to keep the evil spirit away. Their objective was to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit.

Therefore, local people threw sticky rice dumplings into the river to prevent the fish from devouring his body, and arose the noise of boat racing toraced boats so that the resulting noise would keep the evil spirits away aiming to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit. Therefore, local people threw sticky rice dumplings into the river to prevent the fish from devouring his body and raced boats so that the resulting noise would keep the evil spirits away aiming to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit.

他の複雑な分です。とても上手に書けていますよ。

Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone, why we people in China only celebrate this stateman or poet?


Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone, why wedo people in China only celebrate this stateman orand poet? Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone, why do people in China only celebrate this stateman and poet?

Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone, so why we people indo the Chinaese only celebrate this statesman or poet? Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone, so why do the Chinese only celebrate this statesman or poet?

Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone, so why do we people in China only celebrate this statesman or poet? Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone so why do we people in China only celebrate this statesman or poet?

As to my understanding and give a personal opinion on this; Qu Yuan would like to suicide when his country was conquered, this is what our government wants to imply to us.


As to my understanding and to give amy personal opinion on this; Qu Yuan would like tocommit suicide when his country was conquered, this is what our government wants to imply to us. As to my understanding and to give my personal opinion on this; Qu Yuan would commit suicide when his country was conquered, this is what our government wants to imply to us.

Last clause (the one about the government) could be rephrased as 'this is the inference that the government wants us to make'. But your version also makes sense.

As to myfar as I understanding and to give ayou my personal opinion on this; Qu Yuan would like toanted to commit suicide when his country was conquered, t. This is what our government wants to imply toteach us. As far as I understand and to give you my personal opinion on this; Qu Yuan wanted to commit suicide when his country was conquered. This is what our government wants to teach us.

As to my understanding and to give a personal opinion on this;, Qu Yuan would like toanted to commit suicide when his country was conquered, and this is what our government wants to imply to us. As to my understanding and to give a personal opinion on this, Qu Yuan wanted to commit suicide when his country was conquered and this is what our government wants to imply to us.

怖い。みんなが自殺をするなら、誰も国を守れませんね。

They'd like to see this idea be inherited from generation to generation.


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They'd like to see this idea be inheritedpassed down from generation to generation. They'd like to see this idea be passed down from generation to generation.

They'd like to see this idea be inheritedpassed on from generation to generation. They'd like to see this idea be passed on from generation to generation.

この添削の方が自然だと思います。

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