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ruby

Jan. 2, 2020

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Pizza Rat

Today, I stumbled onto a jaw-dropping video that went viral 4 years ago.
This Youtube video showed a rat dragged a slice of pizza bigger than himself.
Tons of people have viewed this Pizza Rat video so far.

I thought that this rat was so adorable because I could imagine he probably wanted to bring back food to his family.

I 'll post several expressions that I learned today: a real defense guru, a harridan, without reservations, well-lit, without a hitch, a wide berth, a shiner=a black eye, on the lam=on the run, annulment, a tourniquet, a bundler, fumble into.

Thank you for reading this.

今日、私は4年前バスった、びっくりする動画を見つけました。
このYoutubeビデオでは、ネズミが自分より大きなピザの一切れを引きずっています。
これまでに多くの人がこのビデオを見てきました。

ネズミはおそらく自分の家族に食べ物を持ち帰りたいと思っていたのが想像できるので、とてもかわいいと思いました。

今日学んだいくつかの表現を投稿します：被告側の正真正銘の第一人者、迷いなしに、明るい、何の問題もなしに、十分な空間、あおタン、逃亡中、無効 、止血帯、束ね役、を探る

これを読んでくれてありがとう。

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Today, I stumbled onto a jaw-dropping video that went viral 4four years ago.

"Small" numbers like this are typically written out.

This Youtube video showed a rat draggeding a slice of pizza bigger than himself.

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ruby

Jan. 6, 2020

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Thank you so much for the corrections! You reminded me of how one should write out small numbers up to ☺️ Thanks a lot!

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This Youtube video showed a rat draggeding a slice of pizza bigger than himself.

I’m not sure what pronouns we use for animals these days. Itself? Him/herself?

Tons of people have viewed this Pizza Rat video so far.

I thought that this rat was so adorable because I could imagine he probably wanted to bring back foodfood back to his family.

I’m not sure about the order here.

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ruby

Jan. 3, 2020

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Thank you for the correction!

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Today, I stumbled onto a jaw-dropping video that went viral 4 years ago.

This Youtube video showed a rat draggeding a slice of pizza bigger than himself.

Tons of people have viewed this Pizza Rat video so far.

I thought that this rat was so adorable because I could imagine he probably wanted to bring back food to his family.

I 'll post several expressions that I learned today: a real defense guru, a harridan, without reservations, well-lit, without a hitch, a wide berth, a shiner=a black eye, on the lam=on the run, annulment, a tourniquet, a bundler, fumble into.

Thank you for reading this.

Feedback

I haven't seen that video! It sounds super cute!!

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ruby

Jan. 3, 2020

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Thank you so much for the correction:D

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Pizza Rat

Today, I stumbled onto a jaw-dropping video that went viral 4 years ago.

This Youtube video showed a rat draggeding a slice of pizza bigger than himitself.

Tons of people have viewed this Pizza Rat video so far.

I thoughtink that this rat was so adorable because I could imagine he probably wanted to bring back food to hits family.

"I think" is better because you still think this now. "I thought" sounds like you used to think it but now have a different opinion.

I 'll'm also posting several expressions that I learned today: a real defense guru, a harridan, without reservations, well-lit, without a hitch, a wide berth, a shiner= = a black eye, on the lam= = on the run, annulment, a tourniquet, a bundler, fumble into.

Harridan is a very unusual word that many native speakers probably don't know.

Thank you for reading this.

Feedback

Nice job as usual.

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ruby

Jan. 3, 2020

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Thank you so much for the correction! I keep in mind that harridan is not a common word.

Pizza Rat

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Today, I stumbled onto a jaw-dropping video that went viral 4 years ago.

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Today, I stumbled onto a jaw-dropping video that went viral 4four years ago.

"Small" numbers like this are typically written out.

This Youtube video showed a rat dragged a slice of pizza bigger than himself.

This Youtube video showed a rat draggeding a slice of pizza bigger than himitself.

This Youtube video showed a rat draggeding a slice of pizza bigger than himself.

This Youtube video showed a rat draggeding a slice of pizza bigger than himself.

I’m not sure what pronouns we use for animals these days. Itself? Him/herself?

This Youtube video showed a rat draggeding a slice of pizza bigger than himself.

Tons of people have viewed this Pizza Rat video so far.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Tons of people have viewed this Pizza Rat video so far.

Tons of people have viewed this Pizza Rat video so far.

I thought that this rat was so adorable because I could imagine he probably wanted to bring back food to his family.

I thoughtink that this rat was so adorable because I could imagine he probably wanted to bring back food to hits family.

"I think" is better because you still think this now. "I thought" sounds like you used to think it but now have a different opinion.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought that this rat was so adorable because I could imagine he probably wanted to bring back foodfood back to his family.

I’m not sure about the order here.

I 'll post several expressions that I learned today: a real defense guru, a harridan, without reservations, well-lit, without a hitch, a wide berth, a shiner=a black eye, on the lam=on the run, annulment, a tourniquet, a bundler, fumble into.

I 'll'm also posting several expressions that I learned today: a real defense guru, a harridan, without reservations, well-lit, without a hitch, a wide berth, a shiner= = a black eye, on the lam= = on the run, annulment, a tourniquet, a bundler, fumble into.

Harridan is a very unusual word that many native speakers probably don't know.

I 'll post several expressions that I learned today: a real defense guru, a harridan, without reservations, well-lit, without a hitch, a wide berth, a shiner=a black eye, on the lam=on the run, annulment, a tourniquet, a bundler, fumble into.

Thank you for reading this.

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