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I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books. These days, I read some of Japanese picture book authors' interviews from a magazine. I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read the interview from his wife, which was talking about his past and his work. I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute. When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump into the cuteness and full of laughter world he created.


[日本語]
今日は楽天オンラインショップから1500円のクーボンが届いた。そのクーボンでかがくいひろしさんの絵本を購入した。最近雑誌で絵本作家たちのインタビューを読んだ。奥さんが語ったかがくいひろしさんのことを読んだら、すぐファンになった。かがくいひろしさんが描いただるまさんはすごくかわいいと前から思っていた。購入した絵本が届いたら、かがくいひろしさんが描いた可愛らし、笑いがいっぱいな世界に飛び込みたい。

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[中文]
今天收到了樂天寄來的折價券,所以我就用那張折價券訂購了Kagakuihiroshi的繪本。這幾天,我從一本雜誌上讀了幾位日本繪本作家的訪談。當我讀到Kagakuihiroshi的妻子在訪談中提到,關於他的過去和他的創作時,我當下就成了他的粉絲。我從以前就覺得他畫的不倒翁先生很可愛,等我訂的那些繪本寄到後,我想要將自己沈浸在他所創造的那個可愛的、充滿歡笑的繪本世界中。

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Picture Books

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.

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Picture Books

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.

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Joy

March 31, 2024

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Picture Books

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.

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Joy

March 31, 2024

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Picture Books

These days, I read some of Japanese picture book authors' interviews from a magazine.

I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read the interview from his wife, which was talking about his past and his work.

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.

When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump into the cuteness and full of laughter world he created.

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