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March 26, 2024

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I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books. These days, I read some of Japanese picture book authors' interviews from a magazine. I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read the interview from his wife, which was talking about his past and his work. I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute. When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump into the cuteness and full of laughter world he created.


[日本語]
今日は楽天オンラインショップから1500円のクーボンが届いた。そのクーボンでかがくいひろしさんの絵本を購入した。最近雑誌で絵本作家たちのインタビューを読んだ。奥さんが語ったかがくいひろしさんのことを読んだら、すぐファンになった。かがくいひろしさんが描いただるまさんはすごくかわいいと前から思っていた。購入した絵本が届いたら、かがくいひろしさんが描いた可愛らし、笑いがいっぱいな世界に飛び込みたい。

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[中文]
今天收到了樂天寄來的折價券,所以我就用那張折價券訂購了Kagakuihiroshi的繪本。這幾天,我從一本雜誌上讀了幾位日本繪本作家的訪談。當我讀到Kagakuihiroshi的妻子在訪談中提到,關於他的過去和他的創作時,我當下就成了他的粉絲。我從以前就覺得他畫的不倒翁先生很可愛,等我訂的那些繪本寄到後,我想要將自己沈浸在他所創造的那個可愛的、充滿歡笑的繪本世界中。

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Picture Books

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.

These days, I read some of Japanese picture book authors' interviews fromthrough a magazine.

I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read thestumbled upon an interview from his wife, whicho was talking about his past and his work.

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.

When I get those picture books, I'll likeI can't wait to jump right into the world full of cuteness and full of laughter worldthat he created.s when I get those picture books!

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Kagaku Hiroshi is such a good author! I've heard many great things about how his picture books bring joy to those all round!

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Joy

March 31, 2024

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Thanks for your helping and giving me feedback.

Picture Books

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.

These daysRecently, I read some interviews of Japanese picture book authors' interviews from a magazine.

I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read the interview from his wife, whicho was talking about his past and his work.

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.

When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump into the cuteness and full of laughter world he created world that he created, which is full of laughter.

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Joy

March 31, 2024

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Thank you!

Picture Books

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.

These days, I read some of JapaneseI recently read interviews with picture book authors' interviews from a magazines.

I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, whenafter I read thean interview fromwith his wife, which waso talkinged about his past and his work.

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.

When I getreceive those picture books, I'lld like to jumpdive into the world full of cuteness and full of laughter world he created by Hiroshi Kagakui.

I corrected this sentence to match your text in Japanese.

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Joy

March 31, 2024

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Thank you very much.

Picture Books

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used ithem to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.

These days, I read some of Japanese picture book authors' interviews from a magazine.

I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read the interview from his wife, which was talking about his past and his work.

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.

When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump into the cuteness and full of laughter world he created.

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Joy

March 31, 2024

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Thank you!

CLEARER (AND FOR NON-JAPANESE): I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.picture books by Hiroshi Katakei.

These days, I have been reading some of Japanese picture book authors' interviews from a magazines.

If you are reading from more than one magazine, this is is better.

I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read thethis illustrator after reading an interview from his wife, which was talking abouto mentioned his past and his works.

NOTE: Many non-Japanese might not that he is deceased, or even when he lived. It might be nice to mention that detail for some readers.

I've always thought that the Ddaruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshithis artist were really cute.

SUGGESTION: Instead of reading his name over an over, use expressions such as "this artist" or "this illustrator."

When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump become immersed into the cuteness and full of laughter of the worlds he created.

He created more than one world, right? (Perhaps the plural "worlds" is best.)

Feedback

Nice! Thanks for introducing this artist to me.

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Joy

March 31, 2024

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Thank you for correcting my writing and teaching me English.

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I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read the interview from his wife, which was talking about his past and his work.


I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read thethis illustrator after reading an interview from his wife, which was talking abouto mentioned his past and his works.

NOTE: Many non-Japanese might not that he is deceased, or even when he lived. It might be nice to mention that detail for some readers.

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I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, whenafter I read thean interview fromwith his wife, which waso talkinged about his past and his work.

I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read the interview from his wife, whicho was talking about his past and his work.

I became a fan of Kagakuihiroshi, when I read thestumbled upon an interview from his wife, whicho was talking about his past and his work.

I've always thought that the Daruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshi were really cute.


I've always thought that the Ddaruma dolls drawn by Kagakuihiroshithis artist were really cute.

SUGGESTION: Instead of reading his name over an over, use expressions such as "this artist" or "this illustrator."

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When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump into the cuteness and full of laughter world he created.


When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump become immersed into the cuteness and full of laughter of the worlds he created.

He created more than one world, right? (Perhaps the plural "worlds" is best.)

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When I getreceive those picture books, I'lld like to jumpdive into the world full of cuteness and full of laughter world he created by Hiroshi Kagakui.

I corrected this sentence to match your text in Japanese.

When I get those picture books, I'll like to jump into the cuteness and full of laughter world he created world that he created, which is full of laughter.

When I get those picture books, I'll likeI can't wait to jump right into the world full of cuteness and full of laughter worldthat he created.s when I get those picture books!

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.


CLEARER (AND FOR NON-JAPANESE): I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.picture books by Hiroshi Katakei.

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used ithem to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.

I got a coupon from Rakuten.com today, and I used it to order some Kagakuihiroshi's picture books.

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