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Sumomo

Oct. 14, 2021

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Picture Books

I bought 11picture books at online flea market site. All of them are written both in English and Japanese. In addition, they have CDs with them, so I can practice reading them out loud.
I want to read them with one of my students whose mother tongue is English. One day, I become a grandma, I hope to read them for my grandchildren as well.

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Picture Books

I bought 11 picture books aton an online flea market site.

Writing "online" makes "site" a bit redundant; the meaning is implied.

All of them are written both in English and Japanese.

In addition, they have CDs with them, so I can practice reading them out loud.

I want to read them with one of my students whose mother tongue is English.

One day, when I become a grandma, I hope to read them forto my grandchildren as well.

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This sounds like a lot of fun ahead! I hope you enjoy them greatly, and that one day your future grandchildren will too!

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Sumomo

Oct. 14, 2021

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Thank you for your corrections and saying that!
Yeah, I hope so too!

Picture Books


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I bought 11picture books at online flea market site.


I bought 11 picture books aton an online flea market site.

Writing "online" makes "site" a bit redundant; the meaning is implied.

All of them are written both in English and Japanese.


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In addition, they have CDs with them, so I can practice reading them out loud.


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I want to read them with one of my students whose mother tongue is English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One day, I become a grandma, I hope to read them for my grandchildren as well.


One day, when I become a grandma, I hope to read them forto my grandchildren as well.

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