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I'm installing the pictures which wrer took by my wife.
She is not familiar for PC, so I always do the supporting.
But she has a newer model of iPhone than mine.
So, the pictures almost shows our daughter.
She joined to a sports day last month.
We took a lot of pictures at that time.
Recently, it guradually degreased that printing photoes and making albums.
By the way, what is the difference between "picture" and "photo(photograph)"?
Please teach me!
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You said you took a lot of pictures at the Sports Day.
I'm installing the pictures which wrer took by my wife took.
You could also say "which were taken by".
It is incorrect to say "were took"
She is not familiar forwith a PC, so I always do the supporting.¶
The correct prepositional phrase is to be "familiar with".
"a PC" or "our PC'
But she has a newer model of iPhoner iPhone is newer than mine.
This is simple and probably what a native speaker would say.
So,Most of the pictures almost showsre of our daughter.
This is what a native speaker would say.
It's not wrong to use the verb "show" but we usually use it when we are pointing something out. For example, "Show me your new iPhone." or "I'll show you how to upload pictures to the PC"
She joinparticipated toin a sports day last month.
We don't use "join" in this way. We join a club or a conversation, but we participate in events.
It isn't necessary to capitalize the day (Sports Day), but if the event had a title, the title would be capitalized.
Recently, ithe PC? has guradually degcreased that printing photoes and making albums.
The reader doesn't know what "it" is.
I added "has" because this action started in the past and is continuing into the present (now), so it is ongoing.
Decrease and increase are opposites. They mean to make less or to make more.
By the way, what is the difference between "picture" and "photo(photograph)"?
A picture can be made with a pencil, with paint, with anything. The word "picture" is general.
A photo is a specific kind of picture. We take photos with a camera. The word photo is specific.
Google Images include photos and other kinds of pictures.
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Picture Pictures You said you took a lot of pictures at the Sports Day. |
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I'm installing the pictures which wrer took by my wife. I'm installing the pictures You could also say "which were taken by". It is incorrect to say "were took" |
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She is not familiar for PC, so I always do the supporting. She is not familiar The correct prepositional phrase is to be "familiar with". "a PC" or "our PC' |
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But she has a newer model of iPhone than mine. But This is simple and probably what a native speaker would say. |
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So, the pictures almost shows our daughter.
This is what a native speaker would say. It's not wrong to use the verb "show" but we usually use it when we are pointing something out. For example, "Show me your new iPhone." or "I'll show you how to upload pictures to the PC" |
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She joined to a sports day last month. She We don't use "join" in this way. We join a club or a conversation, but we participate in events. It isn't necessary to capitalize the day (Sports Day), but if the event had a title, the title would be capitalized. |
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We took a lot of pictures at that time. |
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Recently, it guradually degreased that printing photoes and making albums. Recently, The reader doesn't know what "it" is. I added "has" because this action started in the past and is continuing into the present (now), so it is ongoing. Decrease and increase are opposites. They mean to make less or to make more. |
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By the way, what is the difference between "picture" and "photo(photograph)"? By the way, what is the difference between "picture" and "photo(photograph)"? A picture can be made with a pencil, with paint, with anything. The word "picture" is general. A photo is a specific kind of picture. We take photos with a camera. The word photo is specific. Google Images include photos and other kinds of pictures. |
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