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Koheisan

yesterday

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Picture

I'm installing the pictures which wrer took by my wife.
She is not familiar for PC, so I always do the supporting.
But she has a newer model of iPhone than mine.
So, the pictures almost shows our daughter.
She joined to a sports day last month.
We took a lot of pictures at that time.
Recently, it guradually degreased that printing photoes and making albums.

By the way, what is the difference between "picture" and "photo(photograph)"?
Please teach me!

Corrections

Pictures

You said you took a lot of pictures at the Sports Day.

I'm installing the pictures which wrer took by my wife took.

You could also say "which were taken by".
It is incorrect to say "were took"

She is not familiar forwith a PC, so I always do the supporting.

The correct prepositional phrase is to be "familiar with".
"a PC" or "our PC'

But she has a newer model of iPhoner iPhone is newer than mine.

This is simple and probably what a native speaker would say.

So,Most of the pictures almost showsre of our daughter.

This is what a native speaker would say.
It's not wrong to use the verb "show" but we usually use it when we are pointing something out. For example, "Show me your new iPhone." or "I'll show you how to upload pictures to the PC"

She joinparticipated toin a sports day last month.

We don't use "join" in this way. We join a club or a conversation, but we participate in events.
It isn't necessary to capitalize the day (Sports Day), but if the event had a title, the title would be capitalized.

Recently, ithe PC? has guradually degcreased that printing photoes and making albums.

The reader doesn't know what "it" is.
I added "has" because this action started in the past and is continuing into the present (now), so it is ongoing.
Decrease and increase are opposites. They mean to make less or to make more.

By the way, what is the difference between "picture" and "photo(photograph)"?

A picture can be made with a pencil, with paint, with anything. The word "picture" is general.
A photo is a specific kind of picture. We take photos with a camera. The word photo is specific.
Google Images include photos and other kinds of pictures.

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Koheisan's avatar
Koheisan

yesterday

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Thank you!
I’ll care to red dotted lines!
Spelling is difficult but I will try it.
And I appreciate for your suggested native phrases.

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Liag

yesterday

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You should always feel free to ask for help with spelling, especially if it is difficult for you. I just mentioned the red dotted line tool in case you were unfamiliar with it. The red dotted line tool is most useful if you can correct a word by yourself in one or two attempts. You should always let native speakers show you how to spell words you don't use often and words that you have no idea how to spell.

Picture


Pictures

You said you took a lot of pictures at the Sports Day.

I'm installing the pictures which wrer took by my wife.


I'm installing the pictures which wrer took by my wife took.

You could also say "which were taken by". It is incorrect to say "were took"

She is not familiar for PC, so I always do the supporting.


She is not familiar forwith a PC, so I always do the supporting.

The correct prepositional phrase is to be "familiar with". "a PC" or "our PC'

But she has a newer model of iPhone than mine.


But she has a newer model of iPhoner iPhone is newer than mine.

This is simple and probably what a native speaker would say.

So, the pictures almost shows our daughter.


So,Most of the pictures almost showsre of our daughter.

This is what a native speaker would say. It's not wrong to use the verb "show" but we usually use it when we are pointing something out. For example, "Show me your new iPhone." or "I'll show you how to upload pictures to the PC"

She joined to a sports day last month.


She joinparticipated toin a sports day last month.

We don't use "join" in this way. We join a club or a conversation, but we participate in events. It isn't necessary to capitalize the day (Sports Day), but if the event had a title, the title would be capitalized.

We took a lot of pictures at that time.


Recently, it guradually degreased that printing photoes and making albums.


Recently, ithe PC? has guradually degcreased that printing photoes and making albums.

The reader doesn't know what "it" is. I added "has" because this action started in the past and is continuing into the present (now), so it is ongoing. Decrease and increase are opposites. They mean to make less or to make more.

By the way, what is the difference between "picture" and "photo(photograph)"?


By the way, what is the difference between "picture" and "photo(photograph)"?

A picture can be made with a pencil, with paint, with anything. The word "picture" is general. A photo is a specific kind of picture. We take photos with a camera. The word photo is specific. Google Images include photos and other kinds of pictures.

Please teach me!


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