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Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will comeare arriving/coming to themy city where I am living.

They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims.

Interestingly, my friend said that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work inat state companies.

Two guests will go in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.

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They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.

Reordering the adjectives are to make it sound more natural, as native speakers generally keep the type of company very close to the noun company. This is pretty advanced stuff though, so your sentence still makes sense with the order swapped.

Two guests (are? will travel?) in my car andwhile the other three will travel toin my friend's, as they will be staying in different hotels.

They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they that are all Muslims.

Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules, regarding about it, most Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.

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お久しぶりです！

Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am livinglive.

このの方が自然です。

They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and, my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.

Interestingly, my friend said that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.

Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.

Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am livinglive.

They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and m. My friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims.

Interestingly, my friend saidtold me that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.

TI will drive two guests in my car and t. The other three will travel todrive with my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.

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Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am livinglive.

They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.

Two guests in my car and the other three will travel towith my friend's, t. They will all be staying in different hotels.

Picking up Guests

They are engineers from an {oil-state-owned company | state-owned oil company}, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.

“Oil-state-owned company” is possible (a company that is owned by an oil state, such as Saudi Arabia), but I think “state-owned oil company” is probably what you mean.

Two guests will ride in my car and the other three will travel to (in?) my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.

“Travel to my friend’s” seems odd, because you don’t tell us HOW they will travel to your friend’s home, and you then go on to say they’ll be staying in a hotel, which makes me wonder why they would go your friend’s home. Maybe you mean “travel in my friend’s (car)”?

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Thinks 'Picking up" sounds better.

Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am livinglive.

Present tense for live as your current state.

They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims.

state-owned describes the "oil company" so goes first.

Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.

Two sentences not linked by 'and' so need full stop rather than comma.