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Feb. 2, 2022

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Piano Keys

Piano keys decomposing in a frantic jazz rhythm. Each letter is composed in two colors of the same tone separated by a white line. As a curiosity, inside each letter you can see several initial letter too. This design is perfect as a gift for jazz lovers.

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Piano Keys

Piano keys decomposing in a frantic jazz rhythm.

Each letter is composed inof two colors of the same tone separated by a white line.

As a curiositInterestingly, inside each letter, you can see several initial letter too.

I don't know what you're trying to say here.

This design is perfect as a gift for jazz lovers.

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Good job!

Piano Keys

Piano keys decomposing in a frantic jazz rhythm.

Each letter is composed in two colors of the same tone separated by a white line.

As a cCuriositusly, inside each letter you can see several initial letters, too.

"several" is plural so it needs a plural noun.

It's a little difficult to correct this as your entry is more like a poem instead of a straight essay but I'll do the best I can without ruining the intent of your words.

This design is perfect as a gift for jazz lovers.

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Very well done! This was pretty to read. Thank you.

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Ducky

Feb. 4, 2022

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Thanks for corrections and nice feedback.

As a curiosity, inside each letter you can see several initial letters too.

What do you mean by initial here? Another letter, a smaller letter?

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Is this a poem? It's hard to correct since it seems poetic, in which case it's correct.

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Ducky

Feb. 2, 2022

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As a curiosity, inside each letter you can see several initial letters too.

Yes, several smaller letters inside.

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Ducky

Feb. 2, 2022

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No, isn't a poem. It is an illustration with the letters "JAZZ", and a piano keys bellow them. I sent a picture with the text.

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Ducky

Feb. 4, 2022

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Thanks for feedback.

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Each letter is composed in two colors of the same tone separated by a white line.


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Each letter is composed inof two colors of the same tone separated by a white line.

As a curiosity, inside each letter you can see several initial letter too.


As a curiosity, inside each letter you can see several initial letters too.

What do you mean by initial here? Another letter, a smaller letter?

As a cCuriositusly, inside each letter you can see several initial letters, too.

"several" is plural so it needs a plural noun. It's a little difficult to correct this as your entry is more like a poem instead of a straight essay but I'll do the best I can without ruining the intent of your words.

As a curiositInterestingly, inside each letter, you can see several initial letter too.

I don't know what you're trying to say here.

This design is perfect as a gift for jazz lovers.


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