Jan. 13, 2022
Phone English
I started to attend an English speaking class on the phone.
Today is the first class, so I was nervous when I received the phone call for the first time.
After introducing with my new teacher, I tried to talk as much as possible.
We talked about 20 minutes and I am able to listen to our conversations after the class.
Unlikely writing sentences on this site, speaking in English is more difficult.
I can't make clear sentences , and I make a lot of mistakes and errors during speaking.
I have to listen to my recorded voice again and try to make better sentences until the next class.
Phone English
I started to attend an English speaking class on the phone.
Today iwas the first class, so I was nervous when I received the phone call for the first time.
After introducing withmyself to my new teacher, I tried to talk as much as possible.
We talked for about 20 minutes, and I am able to listen to our conversations after the class.
Unlikely writing sentences on this site, speaking in English is more difficult.
I can't make clear sentences , and I make a lot of mistakes and errors during speaking.
I have to listen to my recorded voice again and try to make better sentences until the next class.
Feedback
Congratulations on finishing one class! SummerTeaWater님 화이팅! :)
Jan. 13, 2022
Unlikely writing sentences on this site, speaking in English is more difficult.
I missed a correction here:
Unlike writing sentences on this site, speaking in English is more difficult.
Jan. 14, 2022
너무 고맙습니다!
Phone English
I started to attend an Englisham starting an English class to practice my speaking class on the phone.
When you are talking about a class (or school in general), the idea of "attending" is implied, so you don't have to say that.
Also, I added "to practice my" before the word "speaking" to provide more clarity about why you are taking the class.
Today iwas the first class, so I was nervous when I received the phone call for the first time.
(Subject-Verb Agreement) The first class already took place, so you should use "was" instead of "is".
Because you already said that the first class was today, you don't have to include "for the first time" at the end of the sentence.
After introducing withmyself to my new teacher, I tried to talk as much as possible.
Introduce yourself *to* someone, not *with* someone.
The rest of the sentence is perfect!
We talked for about 20 minutes and I amwas able to listen to our conversations after the class.
(Subject-Verb Agreement) The class has finished, so you should use "was able" and not "is able".
Unlikely writing sentences on this site, speaking in English is more difficult.
Most of this sentence is perfect! Just a minor spelling error :)
I can't make clear sentences , and I make a lot of mistakes and errors during speaking.
I have to listen to my recorded voicevoice recording again and try topractice makeing better sentences untilfor the next class.
"Voice recording" sounds more natural than "recorded voice" in this sentence, but the meaning is the same.
The other edits are stylistic; your original sentence is fine!
Feedback
You did very well. Practicing speaking is quite difficult in any language! My Korean speaking skill is not good at all. Good luck in your future speaking classes!
Jan. 14, 2022
Thank you so much!
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Phone English This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I started to attend an English speaking class on the phone. I When you are talking about a class (or school in general), the idea of "attending" is implied, so you don't have to say that. Also, I added "to practice my" before the word "speaking" to provide more clarity about why you are taking the class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is the first class, so I was nervous when I received the phone call for the first time. Today (Subject-Verb Agreement) The first class already took place, so you should use "was" instead of "is". Because you already said that the first class was today, you don't have to include "for the first time" at the end of the sentence. Today |
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After introducing with my new teacher, I tried to talk as much as possible. After introducing Introduce yourself *to* someone, not *with* someone. The rest of the sentence is perfect! After introducing |
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We talked about 20 minutes and I am able to listen to our conversations after the class. We talked for about 20 minutes and I (Subject-Verb Agreement) The class has finished, so you should use "was able" and not "is able". We talked for about 20 minutes, and I am able to listen to our conversations after the class. |
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Unlikely writing sentences on this site, speaking in English is more difficult. Unlike Most of this sentence is perfect! Just a minor spelling error :) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can't make clear sentences , and I make a lot of mistakes and errors during speaking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have to listen to my recorded voice again and try to make better sentences until the next class. I have to listen to my "Voice recording" sounds more natural than "recorded voice" in this sentence, but the meaning is the same. The other edits are stylistic; your original sentence is fine! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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