Jan. 10, 2021
I had my smartphone for almost four years now. It's an iPhone SE. My family says it's too little and that I should get a new one before I damage my eyesight. However, I like the fact that it's not big, because it can fit easily in my pocket (although sometimes it doesn't because some jeans have tiny pockets).
I have to admit that it's not in the best of conditions. The battery is pretty damaged, but it lasts a whole day if I don't use it too much. I used it for an hour and a half today and it consumed 50% of the power. Also, the sensor for the front speaker doesn't work well so I can't listen to audios by bringing the phone near my ear, which is very inconvenient sometimes. My phone case is also breaking, but I don't know if it's really worth changing.
I think I can use it for another whole year, but since prices rise more and more in my country I don't know if it wouldn't be convenient to buy a new phone this year. I'll have to think about it.
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I've had my smartphone for almost four years now.
It's an iPhone SE.
My family says it's too littlesmall and that I should get a new one before I damage my eyesight.
However, I like the fact that it's not big, because it can fit easily in my pocket (although sometimes it doesn't because some jeans have tiny pockets).
I have to admit that it's not in the best of conditions.
The battery is pretty damaged, but it lasts a whole day if I don't use it too much.
I used it for an hour and a half today and it consumed 50% of theits power.
Also, the sensor for the front speaker doesn't work well so I can't listen to audios by bringing with the phone nearto my ear, which is very inconvenient sometimes.
My phone case is also breaking, but I don't know if it's really worth changing.
I think I can use it for another whole year, but since prices rise more and more in my country I don't know if it wouldn't beare rising in my country, perhaps it's convenient to buy a new phone this year.
I'll have to think about it.
Phone
I have had my smartphone for almost four years now.
It's an iPhone SE.
My family says it's too little and that I should get a new one before I damage my eyesight.
However, I like the fact that it's not big, because it can fit easily in my pocket (although sometimes it doesn't because some jeans have tiny pockets).
I have to admit that it's not in the best of conditions.
The battery is pretty damaged, but it lasts a whole day if I don't use it too much.
I used it for an hour and a half today and it consumed 50% of the power.
Also, the sensor for the front speaker doesn't work well so I can't listen to audios by bringing the phone near my ear, which is very inconvenient sometimes.
My phone case is also breaking, but I don't know if it's really worth changing.
I think I can use it for another whole year, but since prices rise more and more in my country I don't know if it wouldn't bkeep rising in my country it might be more convenient to buy a new phone this year.
I'll have to think about it.
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I've had my smartphone for almost four years now.
It's an iPhone SE.
My family says it's too little and that I should get a new one before I damage my eyesight.
However, I like the fact that it's not big, because it can fit easily fit in my pocket (although sometimes it doesn't because some jeans have tiny pockets).
I have to admit that it's not in the best of conditions.
The battery is pretty damaged, but it can still lasts a whole day if I don't use it too much.
I used it for an hour and a half today and it consumed 50% of the power.
Also, the sensor for the front speaker doesn't work well so I can't listen to audios by bringing the phone nearclose to my ear, which is very inconvenient sometimes.
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