Feb. 10, 2022
I think motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat.
It's good when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on that.
And i heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.
not relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.
now it became habitual, like a life routine.
you don't wash or eat because you have a motivation, it's just how you live.
When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped my progress.
And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can work further on without motivations when i start learning an another language
a bit casual writing but I'm working on punctuation and article (a/an/the), nit-picky correction is appreciated
I think of motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat. I think of motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat.
It's goodnice when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on thait.
It's nice when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on it.
"nice" feels more natural to me than "good" here, but I can't explain why.
And iI heard a story thatabout how marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.
And I heard a story about how marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.
nNot relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.
Not relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.
now itIt's becaome habitual, like a life routine.
It's become habitual, like a life routine.
yYou don't washbathe or eat because you have a're motivationed, it's just how you live.
You don't bathe or eat because you're motivated, it's just how you live.
When iI used to rely on a motivation while learning English, iI often stopped my progresstudies.
When I used to rely on motivation while learning English, I often stopped my studies.
And I'll try to make it habitual so that iI can workgo further on without motivations when iI start learning an another language
I'll try to make it habitual so that I can go further without motivation when I start learning an another language
What's "it" here?
I think motivation ais alike the wind when you're rowing a boat.
I think motivation is like the wind when you're rowing a boat.
It's good when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on that.
And iI heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.
And I heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.
nNot relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.
Not relying on motivation actually helped me when learning English.
you don't say "a motivation" you just say "motivation"
nNow it has became habitual, like a lifedaily routine.
Now it has became habitual, like a daily routine.
yYou don't washbathe or eat because you have a motivation, it's just how you live.
You don't bathe or eat because you have motivation, it's just how you live.
When iI used to rely on a motivation while learning English, iI often stopped my progress.
When I used to rely on motivation while learning English, I often stopped my progress.
don't forget to capitalize "I"
And I'll try to make it a habitual so that iI can work further oncontinue to work without motivations when iI start learning an another language.
And I'll try to make it a habit so that I can continue to work without motivation when I start learning another language.
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You did a good job writing this. I enjoyed reading your perspectives on learning English!
my thoughts about motivation when learning a language
I think of motivation as a windbreeze when you're rowing a boat.
I think of motivation as a breeze when you're rowing a boat.
You can also say "as wind when you're rowing a boat," but a breeze is closer to the meaning of something that comes and goes.
It's good when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on that.
And i heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.
not relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.
now it has becaome habitual, like a life routine.
now it has become habitual, like a life routine.
you don't wash or eat because you have a motivation, it's just how you live.
When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped my progressing.
When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped progressing.
And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can workcontinue further on without motivations when i start learning an another language
And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can continue further on without motivation when i start learning another language
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I completely agree. I love your analogy with rowing a boat. Great job!
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I think motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat.
I think of motivation as a You can also say "as wind when you're rowing a boat," but a breeze is closer to the meaning of something that comes and goes.
I think motivation I think of motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat. I think of motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat. |
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It's good when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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And i heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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not relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
you don't say "a motivation" you just say "motivation"
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now it became habitual, like a life routine.
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you don't wash or eat because you have a motivation, it's just how you live. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped my progress.
When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped
When don't forget to capitalize "I"
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And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can work further on without motivations when i start learning an another language
And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can
And I'll try to make it a habit
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