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my thoughts about motivation when learning a language

I think motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat.
It's good when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on that.
And i heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.

not relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.
now it became habitual, like a life routine.
you don't wash or eat because you have a motivation, it's just how you live.

When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped my progress.
And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can work further on without motivations when i start learning an another language


a bit casual writing but I'm working on punctuation and article (a/an/the), nit-picky correction is appreciated

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It's good when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on that.

my thoughts about motivation when learning a language

It's good when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on that.

And i heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.

not relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.

you don't wash or eat because you have a motivation, it's just how you live.

my thoughts about motivation when learning a language


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I think motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat.


I think of motivation as a windbreeze when you're rowing a boat. I think of motivation as a breeze when you're rowing a boat.

You can also say "as wind when you're rowing a boat," but a breeze is closer to the meaning of something that comes and goes.

I think motivation ais alike the wind when you're rowing a boat. I think motivation is like the wind when you're rowing a boat.

I think of motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat. I think of motivation as a wind when you're rowing a boat.

It's good when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on that.


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It's goodnice when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on thait. It's nice when you have it but you cannot rely entirely on it.

"nice" feels more natural to me than "good" here, but I can't explain why.

And i heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.


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And iI heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running. And I heard a story that marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.

And iI heard a story thatabout how marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running. And I heard a story about how marathoners don't think about the finish line when they're running.

not relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.


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nNot relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English. Not relying on motivation actually helped me when learning English.

you don't say "a motivation" you just say "motivation"

nNot relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English. Not relying on a motivation actually helped me when learning English.

now it became habitual, like a life routine.


now it has becaome habitual, like a life routine. now it has become habitual, like a life routine.

nNow it has became habitual, like a lifedaily routine. Now it has became habitual, like a daily routine.

now itIt's becaome habitual, like a life routine. It's become habitual, like a life routine.

you don't wash or eat because you have a motivation, it's just how you live.


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yYou don't washbathe or eat because you have a motivation, it's just how you live. You don't bathe or eat because you have motivation, it's just how you live.

yYou don't washbathe or eat because you have a're motivationed, it's just how you live. You don't bathe or eat because you're motivated, it's just how you live.

When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped my progress.


When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped my progressing. When i used to rely on a motivation while learning English, i often stopped progressing.

When iI used to rely on a motivation while learning English, iI often stopped my progress. When I used to rely on motivation while learning English, I often stopped my progress.

don't forget to capitalize "I"

When iI used to rely on a motivation while learning English, iI often stopped my progresstudies. When I used to rely on motivation while learning English, I often stopped my studies.

And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can work further on without motivations when i start learning an another language


And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can workcontinue further on without motivations when i start learning an another language And I'll try to make it habitual so that i can continue further on without motivation when i start learning another language

And I'll try to make it a habitual so that iI can work further oncontinue to work without motivations when iI start learning an another language. And I'll try to make it a habit so that I can continue to work without motivation when I start learning another language.

And I'll try to make it habitual so that iI can workgo further on without motivations when iI start learning an another language I'll try to make it habitual so that I can go further without motivation when I start learning an another language

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