Feb. 14, 2021
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Perfume has revealed their favorite chocolates. Let’s take a look!
The iconic Japanese electronic music trio, Perfume, has introduced each member’s favorite chocolate. The introduction started with an Instagram post on Feb. 11 that says, “In the spirit of ‘Chocolate Disco’, Perfume is sharing their favorite chocolates just in time for Valentine’s Day!”
Turns out, Yuka Kashino and Ayano Omoto picked My Honey’s Honey Chocolat Sand Leap and La Maison du Chocolat’s Cognac Truffles, respectively. On top of that, Ayaka Nishiwaki chose Mathez’s French Cocao Truffles. To many fans’ surprise, the prices of these products range from $40 to $60.
In addition to introducing their favorite chocolates, Perfume is set to live stream the “P.T.A. TV Vol. 12 -Bar KAORI” to celebrate the 13th anniversary of their fan club, “P.T.A.” The event will be held tonight at 6:00 p.m. JST.
“Chocolate Disco” is a track included in “Fan Service,” Perfume’s 9th single album released Feb.14, 2007. Full of jolly lyrics about Valentine’s Day, “Chocolate Disco” is one of Perfume’s many hit songs.
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Perfume has revealed their favorite chocolates.
Let’s take a look!
The iconic Japanese electronic music trio, Perfume, has introduced each member’s favorite chocolate.
The introduction started with an Instagram post on Feb. 11 that says, “In the spirit of ‘Chocolate Disco’, Perfume is sharing their favorite chocolates just in time for Valentine’s Day!”.
TIt turns out, Yuka Kashino and Ayano Omoto picked My Honey’s Honey Chocolat Sand Leap and La Maison du Chocolat’s Cognac Truffles, respectively.
You can say "Turns out..." if you are speaking, but in written language it is usually better to write the whole phrase so it makes grammatical sense ("It turns out").
On top of that, Ayaka Nishiwaki also chose Mathez’s French Cocao Truffles.
I believe "On top of that" is used for intensifying a point/opinion/argument. But here, you are just adding extra information of equal importance, so it may be better to use a phrase such as "also" or "additionally".
To many fans’ surprise, the prices of these products range from $40 to $60.
12 - Bar KAORI” to celebrate the 13th anniversary of their fan club, “P.T.A.”. The event will be held tonight at 6:00 p.m. JST.
“Chocolate Disco” is a track included in “Fan Service,” Perfume’s 9th single album released Feb.14, 2007.
Full of jollviely lyrics about Valentine’s Day, “Chocolate Disco” is one of Perfume’s many hit songs.
'Jolly' also means 'cheerful' or 'happy', but I have an idea it doesn't have quite the right nuance here. I often think about Christmas when I hear the word 'jolly'. Maybe words such as "upbeat", "energetic" or "lively" would be a better fit here.
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Great work here! Do you have a favourite chocolate out of the ones the members of Perfume chose?
Feb. 18, 2021
Thank you very much! I really appreciate it! :)
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The introduction started with an Instagram post on Feb. 11 that says, “In the spirit of ‘Chocolate Disco’, Perfume is sharing their favorite chocolates just in time for Valentine’s Day!” The introduction started with an Instagram post on Feb. 11 that says, “In the spirit of ‘Chocolate Disco’, Perfume is sharing their favorite chocolates just in time for Valentine’s Day!”. |
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Turns out, Yuka Kashino and Ayano Omoto picked My Honey’s Honey Chocolat Sand Leap and La Maison du Chocolat’s Cognac Truffles, respectively.
You can say "Turns out..." if you are speaking, but in written language it is usually better to write the whole phrase so it makes grammatical sense ("It turns out"). |
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On top of that, Ayaka Nishiwaki chose Mathez’s French Cocao Truffles.
I believe "On top of that" is used for intensifying a point/opinion/argument. But here, you are just adding extra information of equal importance, so it may be better to use a phrase such as "also" or "additionally". |
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To many fans’ surprise, the prices of these products range from $40 to $60. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In addition to introducing their favorite chocolates, Perfume is set to live stream the “P.T.A. TV Vol. |
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12 -Bar KAORI” to celebrate the 13th anniversary of their fan club, “P.T.A.” The event will be held tonight at 6:00 p.m. JST. 12 - Bar KAORI” to celebrate the 13th anniversary of their fan club, “P.T.A.”. The event will be held tonight at 6:00 p.m. JST. |
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“Chocolate Disco” is a track included in “Fan Service,” Perfume’s 9th single album released Feb.14, 2007. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Full of jolly lyrics about Valentine’s Day, “Chocolate Disco” is one of Perfume’s many hit songs. Full of 'Jolly' also means 'cheerful' or 'happy', but I have an idea it doesn't have quite the right nuance here. I often think about Christmas when I hear the word 'jolly'. Maybe words such as "upbeat", "energetic" or "lively" would be a better fit here. |
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