July 20, 2021
Pet Dogs
Near my house, there is a small park where many people walk with their dogs.
I really love dogs, so I usually go there to watch them.
I want to take care of my dog, but it isn't allowed by the rule of my building.
Other residents would be able to argue about pets.
What's more, I can't stand when my dog dies.
I remember my childhood when my beloved dog was dead.
At that time, I busted into tears more than a week, and I still remember the sad feeling.
In the end, I can't raise a dog anymore.
Pet Dogs
Near my house, there is a small park where many people walk with their dogs.
I really love dogs, so I usually go there to watch them.
I want to take care of myhave a dog,¶
but it isn'tthere is a no dogs allowed by the rule of¶
in my building or apartment.
Other residents would bare able to argue about pets.
What's more, I can't stand when my dog dies.
I remember my childhood when my beloved dog was diead.
Dead is present tense. Died is past tense.
At that time, I busted into tears more than a week, and I still remember the sad feeling.¶
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At that time I cried for¶
more than a week and I still remember that sad feeling.
In the end, I can't raise a dog anymore.
Feedback
I’m sorry to hear the story about your dog. I have a dog too and sometimes it’s hard to think about the future without him in it. However I cherish the moments I have with him now. Your English Is very good near native! ☺️
July 20, 2021
Thank you. You're sentences are more good to present my feeling and thinkings.
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Pet Dogs This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Near my house, there is a small park where many people walk with their dogs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really love dogs, so I usually go there to watch them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to take care of my dog, but it isn't allowed by the rule of my building. I want to |
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Other residents would be able to argue about pets. Other residents |
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What's more, I can't stand when my dog dies. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I remember my childhood when my beloved dog was dead. I remember my childhood when my beloved dog was die Dead is present tense. Died is past tense. |
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At that time, I busted into tears more than a week, and I still remember the sad feeling. At that time, I busted into tears more than a week, and I still remember the sad feeling.¶ |
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In the end, I can't raise a dog anymore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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