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Sapphire123

June 26, 2022

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I personally don't believe that our personality would change while speaking a different language, yet it changes my first impression from other people. Since I have imitated English speaking from American comedy, when I speak English, there is a subtle change in my tone. I found that my tone in English way more sounds like a enthusiastic person even I am actually an introvert. it is interesting!

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While I personally don't believe that our personality would change while speaking a different language, yet it changes my it does seem to change others' first impression from other peoplof me.

Changed in order for the sentence to flow in a more smooth manner. Comma can be turned into a semi-colon if you want. Either would be fine.

Since I have imitated English speakinglearned spoken English from American comedy, when I speak English, there is a subtle change in my tone.

"Imitated" means that you are only copying the surface details of the language without a deeper understanding of the underlying grammar. "Learned" shows that you have a deeper understanding of the language.

I've found that my tone in English way more sounds more like an enthusiastic person even though I am actually an introvert.

Or "I have found that my tone in English sounds way more like an enthusiastic person even though I am actually an introvert." (If you want to keep the word "way" in the sentence)

iIt is interesting!

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It's a pretty good response. Most of my changes were just my opinions.

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Sapphire123

June 27, 2022

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1. While I personally don't believe that our personality would change when speaking a different language, it does seem to change others' first impression of me.
2. Since I have learned spoken English from American comedy, when I speak English, there is a subtle change in my tone.
3. I've found my tone in English sounds more like an enthusiatic person even though I am actually an introvert.

many thanks :) :) :)

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I personally don't believe that our personality would change while speaking a different language, yet it changes my first impression from other people.


While I personally don't believe that our personality would change while speaking a different language, yet it changes my it does seem to change others' first impression from other peoplof me.

Changed in order for the sentence to flow in a more smooth manner. Comma can be turned into a semi-colon if you want. Either would be fine.

Since I have imitated English speaking from American comedy, when I speak English, there is a subtle change in my tone.


Since I have imitated English speakinglearned spoken English from American comedy, when I speak English, there is a subtle change in my tone.

"Imitated" means that you are only copying the surface details of the language without a deeper understanding of the underlying grammar. "Learned" shows that you have a deeper understanding of the language.

I found that my tone in English way more sounds like a enthusiastic person even I am actually an introvert.


I've found that my tone in English way more sounds more like an enthusiastic person even though I am actually an introvert.

Or "I have found that my tone in English sounds way more like an enthusiastic person even though I am actually an introvert." (If you want to keep the word "way" in the sentence)

I find it interesting!


it is interesting!


iIt is interesting!

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