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Hello, my name is Branca. I was born in Paulo Afonso, in the state of Bahia. Actually, live in Maceió, in the state of Alagoas. This city is a paradise of the water, The color of the Sea is beautiful. Brazilian Caribbean. I love living here. I enjoy living here. Come and see Maceió. It' s totally worth It.

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Personal Presentation

Hello, my name is Branca.

I was born in Paulo Afonso, in the state of Bahia.

AHowever, I actually, live in Maceió, in the state of Alagoas.

I think this sounds much more natural, since "however" helps to show the contrast between your previous sentence and this one.

This city is a paradise of the water,

The color of the Ssea is beautiful.

It's like a Brazilian Caribbean.

"Brazilian Caribbean" is not a sentence by itself.

I love living here.

I enjoy living here.

Come and see Maceió.

It' s totally worth Iit.

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I just googled it and it really does look amazing!

Personal PresentaIntroduction

Hello, my name is Branca.

I was born in Paulo Afonso, in the state of Bahia.

Actually, live in Maceió, in the state of Alagoas.

This city is a paradise ofn the water,

The color of the Ssea is beautiful.

Brazilian Caribbean.

I love living here.

I enjoy living here.

Come and see Maceió.

It' s totally worth It.

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Personal PresentaIntroduction

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Hello, my name is Branca.


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I was born in Paulo Afonso, in the state of Bahia.


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Actually, live in Maceió, in the state of Alagoas.


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AHowever, I actually, live in Maceió, in the state of Alagoas.

I think this sounds much more natural, since "however" helps to show the contrast between your previous sentence and this one.

This city is a paradise of the water,


This city is a paradise ofn the water,

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The color of the Sea is beautiful.


The color of the Ssea is beautiful.

The color of the Ssea is beautiful.

Brazilian Caribbean.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's like a Brazilian Caribbean.

"Brazilian Caribbean" is not a sentence by itself.

I love living here.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I enjoy living here.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Come and see Maceió.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It' s totally worth It.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It' s totally worth Iit.

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