Feb. 19, 2021
Perseverance
A NASA's rover, Perseverance, succeeded in landing on Mars. This is an amazing achievement. The rover will search Mars over three years to find out the potential for life. I think the rover's name is also good because it expresses "Where there is a will there is a way."
Perseverance
A NASA's rover, Perseverance, succeeded in landing on Mars.
"A NASA's rover" puts the "a" in front of NASA, which sounds weird because there is only one NASA. You say "A human went to the moon" because there are lots of humans, and the "a" specifies you are only talking about a specific human, but you would say "NASA went to the moon". A NASA sounds weird.
This is an amazing achievement.
The rover will search Mars over three years to find out the planet's potential for life.
"Find out the potential for life" is a sentence that sounds very general, like you are talking about the potential for life to exist in the universe. I think you are probably talking about how good Mars is for living creatures, so you should specify that.
I think the rover's name is also good because it expresses "Where there is a will there is a way."
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I am excited whenever serious space exploration is brought up. It's always so cool! Good writing, mostly very small mistakes.
Feb. 20, 2021
Thank you so much!
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A NASA's rover, Perseverance, succeeded in landing on Mars.
"A NASA's rover" puts the "a" in front of NASA, which sounds weird because there is only one NASA. You say "A human went to the moon" because there are lots of humans, and the "a" specifies you are only talking about a specific human, but you would say "NASA went to the moon". A NASA sounds weird. |
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This is an amazing achievement. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The rover will search Mars over three years to find out the potential for life. The rover will search Mars over three years to find out the planet's potential for life. "Find out the potential for life" is a sentence that sounds very general, like you are talking about the potential for life to exist in the universe. I think you are probably talking about how good Mars is for living creatures, so you should specify that. |
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I think the rover's name is also good because it expresses "Where there is a will there is a way." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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