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Arya32_f

Feb. 6, 2024

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i feel i have a lot of bad things today,and i feel i distribution of energy in a wrong way.perhaps i should only take rest about 8 hours that's enough,coz the adhd symptoms,I try to use meditation to improve my concentration. I believe that time will bring about changes.i have a 100 ideas,but practise less,i mean i nearly don't do this,because it cost time,and there are a lot of tedious details.of course,the daily project was completed, except for the big project, so give 75 points today.

今天有很多糟糕的事情，而且我感觉我的精力分配的不是很好，看来我还是适合一天只休息八个小时啊，六个小时的专注已经是很不错的事情了，我有一百个点子，但能实践的却很少。还好今天是上夜班？不然我可能会发现今天啥也没学就过去了，当然日常任务还是完成了，然后也学了一点R的basic，实践了一些act的内容。(中文内容更多，因为我用英语表达不出那个意思😖）

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iI feel iI have a lot of bad things today, and iI feel iI distribution of energy in athe wrong way.p Perhaps iI should only take rest abourest 8 hours if that's enough,coz the adhd. Because of my ADHD symptoms, I try to use meditation to improve my concentration.

The emotion comes across here but the details do not.

I believe that time will bring about changes.i. I have a 100 ideas, but in practisce less,i mean i nearly don't do this,because ithey cost time, and there are a lot of tedious details.o Of course, the daily project was completed, e. Except for the big project wasn't, so I give today 75 points today(/100?).

I'm grasping a straws trying to parse the frenetic energy here.

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Get some rest, please take your time with your writing it will only get better with a little more revision. You can use a word editor to fix most of these mistakes.

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Arya32_f

Feb. 7, 2024

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thanks your help

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iI feel i have a lot of bad thingsbad today, and iI feel ithe distribution of energy in a wrong way.ps off. Perhaps iI should only take restsleep about 8 hours, that's enough,coz the adhd should enough. Coz of my ADHD symptoms, I try to use meditation to improve my concentration.

I think you're going for a very colloquial tone here, so instead of "the distribution of energy is off" you could say "the vibe is wrong"/"the vibes are off." That's a pretty popular slang term these days.

I believe that time will bring about changes.i I have a 100hundred ideas, but practise less,i so few of them. I mean i, I nearly doidn't do this, because it costs time, and there are a lot of tedious details.o Of course, the daily project was completed, except for the big project, so give 75 points today.

Just a note: "practise" (with an 's') is UK English. In the USA we just use "practice."

"Of course, the daily project was completed, except for the big project, so give 75 points today." - I'm not sure what you meant by this.

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Keep it up. Remember that doing something badly is often way better than not doing it at all. I have also suffered from ADHD sapping my motivation. Do your best and be kind to yourself.

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Arya32_f

Feb. 7, 2024

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thanks your help

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i feel iI have a lot of bad things going on today, and i feel ithat the distribution of energy in a wrong way.s not quite right. perhaps i should only take rest for about 8 hours. that's enough,. coz of the adhd symptoms, I try to use meditation to improve my concentration.

I believe that time will bring about changes. i have a 100 ideas, but practise less,i mean i nearly don't do this,have put few of them into practice. I mean i basically have tried none of them, because it costs time, and there are a lot of tedious details. of course, I completed the daily project was completed, except for the big project, so give, but didn't get the big project done, so I'll give myself 75 points tofor the day.

pepper pepper pepper

pPepper p, Pepper p, Pepper

Caps for titles.

i feel i have a lot of bad things today,and i feel i distribution of energy in a wrong way.perhaps i should only take rest about 8 hours that's enough,coz the adhd symptoms,I try to use meditation to improve my concentration.

i feel iI have a lot of bad things going on today, and i feel ithat the distribution of energy in a wrong way.s not quite right. perhaps i should only take rest for about 8 hours. that's enough,. coz of the adhd symptoms, I try to use meditation to improve my concentration.

iI feel i have a lot of bad thingsbad today, and iI feel ithe distribution of energy in a wrong way.ps off. Perhaps iI should only take restsleep about 8 hours, that's enough,coz the adhd should enough. Coz of my ADHD symptoms, I try to use meditation to improve my concentration.

I think you're going for a very colloquial tone here, so instead of "the distribution of energy is off" you could say "the vibe is wrong"/"the vibes are off." That's a pretty popular slang term these days.

iI feel iI have a lot of bad things today, and iI feel iI distribution of energy in athe wrong way.p Perhaps iI should only take rest abourest 8 hours if that's enough,coz the adhd. Because of my ADHD symptoms, I try to use meditation to improve my concentration.

The emotion comes across here but the details do not.

I believe that time will bring about changes.i have a 100 ideas,but practise less,i mean i nearly don't do this,because it cost time,and there are a lot of tedious details.of course,the daily project was completed, except for the big project, so give 75 points today.

I believe that time will bring about changes. i have a 100 ideas, but practise less,i mean i nearly don't do this,have put few of them into practice. I mean i basically have tried none of them, because it costs time, and there are a lot of tedious details. of course, I completed the daily project was completed, except for the big project, so give, but didn't get the big project done, so I'll give myself 75 points tofor the day.

I believe that time will bring about changes.i I have a 100hundred ideas, but practise less,i so few of them. I mean i, I nearly doidn't do this, because it costs time, and there are a lot of tedious details.o Of course, the daily project was completed, except for the big project, so give 75 points today.

Just a note: "practise" (with an 's') is UK English. In the USA we just use "practice." "Of course, the daily project was completed, except for the big project, so give 75 points today." - I'm not sure what you meant by this.

I believe that time will bring about changes.i. I have a 100 ideas, but in practisce less,i mean i nearly don't do this,because ithey cost time, and there are a lot of tedious details.o Of course, the daily project was completed, e. Except for the big project wasn't, so I give today 75 points today(/100?).

I'm grasping a straws trying to parse the frenetic energy here.

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