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johnnymnemonic

Aug. 21, 2025

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Peachy

My dog’s name is Peachy. I love her very much. She’s a beautiful Pomeranian spitz. She’s 1,5 years old, and she as clever as a shepherd dog.

I was always sure of my love for cats. But life has told me another thing.

On my stressful days she brings me joy and a good vibes. Spitz’s a really full of energy dog. I love running with her just for pleasure.

Does anyone have a dog?

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Peachy

My dog’s name is Peachy.

I love her very much.

She’s a beautiful Pomeranian sSpitz.

She’s 1,.5 years old, and she's as clever as a shepherd dog.

I was always sure of my love for cats.,

Bbut life has told me another thingshown me I also love dogs, too.

Starting sentences with "but" is considered grammatically wrong.

"Life has told me another thing" sounds strange, so I corrected it to something more natural.

On my stressful days she brings me joy and a good vibes.

Spitzes are really full of energy dog.

I love running with her just for pleasure.

Does anyone have a dog?

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Very good! Some of your sentences are phrased oddly, but if you continue writing you are sure to improve.

I have a German Shepard :)

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johnnymnemonic

Aug. 21, 2025

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Thanks a lot! I'll try to write better! I dream of a German Sheperd :)

Peachy


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My dog’s name is Peachy.


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I love her very much.


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She’s a beautiful Pomeranian spitz.


She’s a beautiful Pomeranian sSpitz.

She’s 1,5 years old, and she as clever as a shepherd dog.


She’s 1,.5 years old, and she's as clever as a shepherd dog.

I was always sure of my love for cats.


I was always sure of my love for cats.,

But life has told me another thing.


Bbut life has told me another thingshown me I also love dogs, too.

Starting sentences with "but" is considered grammatically wrong. "Life has told me another thing" sounds strange, so I corrected it to something more natural.

On my stressful days she brings me joy and a good vibes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Spitz’s a really full of energy dog.


Spitzes are really full of energy dog.

I love running with her just for pleasure.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Does anyone have a dog?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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