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nambatsuyoshi

July 19, 2021

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Peach

I ate some peached for the first time this year. My mother sent us these peaches from Okayama. They were very delicious. Okayama is famous for its peach producing area.
Here is a photo: https://www.instagram.com/p/CRgP3tuJdD9/


今年始めて桃を食べました。岡山から母が送ってくれました。とても美味しかったです。岡山は桃の産地として有名です。
こちらが写真です。https://www.instagram.com/p/CRgP3tuJdD9/

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Peach

I ate some peached for the first time this year.

My mother sent us thessome peaches from Okayama.

Mother is correct but sounds quite unnatural, you could use mum instead.

They were very delicious.

Okayama is famous for its peach producing area.es.

You can just say peaches because people will understand.

Here is a photo: https://www.instagram.com/p/CRgP3tuJdD9/

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nambatsuyoshi

July 19, 2021

4

Thank you!

Peach


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I ate some peached for the first time this year.


I ate some peached for the first time this year.

My mother sent us these peaches from Okayama.


My mother sent us thessome peaches from Okayama.

Mother is correct but sounds quite unnatural, you could use mum instead.

They were very delicious.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Okayama is famous for its peach producing area.


Okayama is famous for its peach producing area.es.

You can just say peaches because people will understand.

Here is a photo: https://www.instagram.com/p/CRgP3tuJdD9/


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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