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Pupil conference

I don't have a school today,Because teachers talk to parents who their students at a school.There is a suprising thing about this for me.That is what students can choose a teacher who want to talk with their parents.In Japanese schools, students and their parents cannot schoose a teacher and their homeroom teacher have a conversation with them.But, I don't care about it , because the facter that every students don't need to go to school.I'm so happy!
A nd I stayed at night last night and I read my favorite comic books .

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Pupil conference

I don't have a school today,

BThis is because the teachers are talking to the parents whof their students at a school today.

There is a suprising thing about this for me.

ThaIt is wthat students can choose a teacher who they want to talk with their parents.

In Japanese schools, students and their parents cannot schoose a teacher, and their homeroom teacher have a conversation with them.

They can or cannot? I feel this sentence contradicts the previous sentence.

But, I don't care about it , because the facter that evermind, because today students don't need to go to school.

"I don't mind" is a good, natural way to say you don't care about something.

I'm so happy!

A nd I stayed at night last nightLast night, I stayed home and I read my favorite comic books .

Pupil conference


Pupil conference

I don't have a school today,


I don't have a school today,

Because teachers talk to parents who their students at a school.


BThis is because the teachers are talking to the parents whof their students at a school today.

There is a suprising thing about this for me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That is what students can choose a teacher who want to talk with their parents.


ThaIt is wthat students can choose a teacher who they want to talk with their parents.

In Japanese schools, students and their parents cannot schoose a teacher and their homeroom teacher have a conversation with them.


In Japanese schools, students and their parents cannot schoose a teacher, and their homeroom teacher have a conversation with them.

They can or cannot? I feel this sentence contradicts the previous sentence.

But, I don't care about it , because the facter that every students don't need to go to school.


But, I don't care about it , because the facter that evermind, because today students don't need to go to school.

"I don't mind" is a good, natural way to say you don't care about something.

I'm so happy!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A nd I stayed at night last night and I read my favorite comic books .


A nd I stayed at night last nightLast night, I stayed home and I read my favorite comic books .

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