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Day 16: Unequal Equality

In this world almost everyone want to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions. But what if these aren't possible at all?
Just a small example. I came here to learn writing English, right? Of course right. LangCorrect says you can learn foreign languages completely free if you correct others in your native language. But I came here with a native language, which almost no one wants to learn, so I'll lose my right to learn English because of the correction rate.

So is it equal to everyone because it's free? Or because almost everyone can reach the internet in the world? No it's not. Because your opportunities depend on where did you born and where do you live right now. It's a bit like a caste system. 😀

Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did we born? I think it's not. There always will be countries that have more power and opportunities than others.

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Day 16: Unequal Equality

But what if these aren't possible at all?

Just a small example.

I came here to learn writing English, right?

So is it equal to everyone because it's free?

Or because almost everyone can reach the internet in the world?

It's a bit like a caste system.

I think it's not.

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Day 16: Unequal Equality

But what if these aren't possible at all?

LangCorrect says you can learn foreign languages completely free if you correct others in your native language.

It's a bit like a caste system.

I think it's not.

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July 21, 2025

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Of course right.


Of course (that's right). Of course (that's right).

More natural to leave the parentheses part off

Of course, right. Of course, right.

Of course right. Of course.

LangCorrect says you can learn foreign languages completely free if you correct others in your native language.


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LangCorrect says you can learn foreign languages completely free if you correct what others wrote in your native language. LangCorrect says you can learn foreign languages completely free if you correct what others wrote in your native language.

Sounds a bit better

But I came here with a native language, which almost no one wants to learn, so I'll lose my right to learn English because of the correction rate.


But I came here with a native language, which almost no one wants to learn, so I'll lose my right to learn English because of themy correction rate. But I came here with a native language which almost no one wants to learn, so I'll lose my right to learn English because of my correction rate.

Or "low correction ratio"

But I came here with aMy native language is Hungarian, which almost no one wants to learn, s. So I'll lose my right to learn English because of the correction rate. My native language is Hungarian, which almost no one wants to learn. So I'll lose my right to learn English because of the correction rate.

The sentence you wrote was grammatically correct.

But I came here with a native language, which almost no one wants to learn, so I'll lose my right to learn English because of the correction rate. But I came here with a native language which almost no one wants to learn, so I'll lose my right to learn English because of the correction rate.

Haha sorry for not learning Hungarian. It seems interesting by being one of the few European languages that are more difficult than Lithuanian, and being related to Finnish despite being so far away, and you guys have the family name - given name name order. But yeah most people won't study it :P

So is it equal to everyone because it's free?


So is it equal to/fair for everyone because it's free? So is it equal/fair for everyone because it's free?

"Fair" would be more commonly used here

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Or because almost everyone can reach the internet in the world?


Or because almost everyone can reachhas access to the internet in the world? Or because almost everyone has access to the internet in the world?

Or because almost everyone can reach the internet in the worldin the world has access to the internet? Or because almost everyone in the world has access to the internet?

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No it's not.


No, it's not. No, it's not.

No, it's not. No, it's not.

No, it's not. No, it's not.

Because your opportunities depend on where did you born and where do you live right now.


Because your opportunities depend on where did youyou were born and where do you live right now. Because your opportunities depend on where you were born and where you live right now.

Because your opportunities depend on where did youyou were born and where do you live right now. Because your opportunities depend on where you were born and where you live right now.

Because your opportunities depend on where did youyou were born and where do you live right now. Because your opportunities depend on where you were born and where you live right now.

I don't think it matters where you live now as long as you have internet access.

BecauseIt seems that your opportunities depend on where did youyou were born and where do you live right now. It seems that your opportunities depend on where you were born and where you live right now.

It is hard to write a good sentence that starts with "because". You finish a thought with "because", e.g. I am hungry because I woke up too late for breakfast. Keep reading more English to see where do / did are used and where they are not used.

It's a bit like a caste system.


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😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did we born?


😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did wwe were born? 😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where we were born?

😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did wwe were born? 😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where we were born?

Or you could say, “Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where ONE WAS born?”

😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did wwe were born? 😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where we were born?

😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where did wwe happened to be born? 😀 Is it possible to get rid of inequalities caused by where we happened to be born?

I think it's not.


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I think it's not. I think it's not.

Or you could say, “I don’t think it is.”

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There always will be countries that have more power and opportunities than others.


There will always will be countries that have more power and opportunities than others. There will always be countries that have more power and opportunities than others.

There will always will be countries that have more power and opportunities than others. There will always be countries that have more power and opportunities than others.

There will always will be countries that have more power and opportunities than others. There will always be countries that have more power and opportunities than others.

Day 16: Unequal Equality


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In this world almost everyone want to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.


In this world, almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions. In this world, almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.

In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions. In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.

In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions. In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.

In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions. In this world almost everyone wants to have equal rights, equal opportunities, and equal living conditions.

But what if these aren't possible at all?


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But what if these aren'is wasn’t possible at all? But what if this wasn’t possible?

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But what if these aren't possible atfter all? But what if these aren't possible after all?

Just a small example.


Just a small example. - Just a small example -

I'd use a dash here to connect it to the next line, because you are about to introduce the example. But if you reversed and listed the example first, following with "Just a small example." would be logical

Just a smalln example., Just an example,

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I came here to learn writing English, right?


I came here to learnimprove my English writing Englishskills, right? I came here to improve my English writing skills, right?

Or you could say, “I came here to develop my English writing skills…”

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